Professional Documents
Culture Documents
AFL 2017 - Edited
AFL 2017 - Edited
Summary Comment: Overall the student has used a variety of shots, fonts and
layouts but I do not think they have a developed understanding of page layout
and design. This has affected their outcome as the arrangement makes the
magazine look too busy. The colour palette has a strange mix of colour that
would not normally be put together. With the two bright colours placed on top of
Summary Comment: Most of the shots used in the is magazine are mid/mid-long shots. This
follows common conventions of a magazine as the audience can see the styling of the model.
There is not much variety of other shots and this can demonstrate a limited skill in framing a shot.
However, the pictures are of a good quality which creates a professional and realistic look. There
does seem to be some thought in the mise en scene of the photographs, however I am not sure
they really fit the genre of the magazine. Additionally, the background features a lot of bright
colours which takes the audiences attention away from the artist (who should be the main feature