Comments to paper 20372-39277-2-RV

Grammar
There are too many grammatical error in abstract
Grammar mistake in first sentence of II.A. Data Center Component
There are too many grammatical error in section III, IV, and V

Equation
Use equation tools to write proper equations
Redundant equation number in section II and IV
(1) and (2) in section IV are not equations, there are merely results of computation.

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