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Total: _5O_/50Ms. Drew Pre-AICE English Language March 8 2017 The Count of Monte Cristo Character Tracking: Villefort 1. “Dll be there, count, I'll be there!” said Villefort quickly” (Dumas 253). This quote displays Villefort’s more early signs of worry. The more the Count questions and leads him on, the more nervous he becomes. Villefort has many different layers of uncertainties in his past and present that put his reputation at risk. He is starting to unravel. 2. “Despite all his self-control, Villefort was visibly agitated” (Dumas 257). This quote reveals that Villefort tries his hardest to suppress his concerns but can’t all of the time. The anxiety that Villefort is expressing shows the decline in his confidence and arrise in unease and paranoia that helps shape his character as the novel progresses. Villefort is a very nervous character who struggles to keep his name clear and his past buried 3. “Villefort, who, until then, had not touched any of the three or four glasses of extraordinary wine placed before him, quickly picked up one of them and drank it down in one gulp” (Dumas 259). This action reveals Villefort’s guilt. The Count is slowly and slyly bringing up an event that triggers nervous fidgets from Villefort. All of little things that Villefort does whenthe Count mentions anything about the crime, Villefort has trouble controlling himself and his nerves. This shows Villefor's worry about his past coming back to haunt him. ; “But since Villefort saw his father only when absolutely necessary, all the old man’s happiness lay in his granddaughter...” (Dumas 245). This quote exemplifies the relationship Villefort has with his father. Since Villefort is Constantly trying to forget his father, and is ashamed of his political views, he stays away. 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"Oh Tl listen to you because I'm very curious to hear what you're going to tell me. I'll ask these gentlemen to be our judges and I'l begin by telling them the facts. Gentlemen Baron Danglars has 10 horses in his stable. Two of them are mine; they're magnificent horses; the finest in Paris. You know them, Monsieur Debrays- my dappled grays. Now just when I'm about to lend my carriage to Madame de Villefort to go to the Bois de Boulogne tomorrow. these horses are nowhere to be found! Monsieur Danglars has no on them and sold them. Oh what an doubt managed to make a few thousand franes abominable breed these speculators are!" (Dumas 204), Madame Danglars is fed up with how Baron Danglars is so obsessed with money. She realizes how he'd rather make a few bucks off of 2 beloved horses than show respect and love towards his wife. Although Danglars has always been obsessed with money and has always had a greed for more power, Madame Danglars decides to stand up for herself and her horses that she cared deeply for now so this won't happen again, even though it does. 2. "If Monsieur Danglars gambles to win or lose three hundred thousand francs in one day, he must be enormously rich." said the count. "He's not the one who gambles!" exclaimed Debray. "It's Madame Danglars. She's very daring," "IF T were you," said Albert, "I'd cure her of that; it would be a service to her future son-in-law."Although Baron Dangl "I'd teach her a les Ta lesson... Make her lose a hundred thousand franes a few times and she'll Soon become more cautious." (Dumas 228), lars is completely run by money, it seems as though his need for wealth runs off er people a ns off on other people as well. Madame Danglars was influenced by her husband so heavily that she doesn! doesn't realize how much she gambles. The way Danglars has an affect on people such as his wife is a large part of the book, mostly because the way he changed both the count and his fe exhibits just how powerful he really is. Shs Cheangon him. "My dear Monsieur Debray," said Danglar, please don't force yourself to stay up and {en to my wife's foolishness tonight: you can listen to it just as well tomorrow. Tonight T'm going to reserve her company for myself because I have some very important things to discuss with her.” This time the blow was so direct that both Debra and Madame Danglars were stunned; they looked at each other as though each hoped to draw help from other in the face of this aggression. But the irresistible power of the master of the house prevailed and the husband was victorious" (Dumas 269). All throughout the novel, Danglars is completely rude and disrespectful of his wife. He always Night to be rude Mean, he has a complains of hi 's wife's ways and makes harsh comments of how she can change things to make herself better. This represents his unwillingness to be a 'family-man! and how he always has to be the dominant in the rel: tionship, even though deep down inside he really does love his family. 4, "Monsieur Morcef," said Danglars, pale with anger and fear, "If | find a mad dog in my path [ kill it and, far from feeling guilty about it, I feel that I have rendered a service to