THE PROPOSAL OF ENGLISH

DRAMA
THE LEGEND OF TOBA LAKE

THE TEACHER
NAYYAROTIN.M.SS
BY

AHMAD MUZAQI
ARINDA GINE. T
EVI NUR MAYA
SITI SHOLICHAH

Class XI-IPA 3
SMAN 1 RENGEL
 Jln. Raya Banjaragung
2013/2014

Table of content

Preface...2

Table of content...1

1.The synopsis of the story...4

2.the scenario the story.5

3.the analysis of the story....9

Orientation......9
Complication.9
Resolution..9
Setting9
Plot..9
Characterization..9
Moral value.....................10
Ending of the story.10
Comment..10
The crew10
Music director.10
Drama director10
Scenario director....10

4.closing...11

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 Preface
Assalamualaikumwr.wb

Praise the presence of the Almighty God for all the a bundance of grace, Inayah, Taufik
and Hinayah so that we can finalize this proposal in the form and content is very simple.
Hopefully,this paper can beused as a reference, instructions and guidance for the reader.
Our hope that this proposal to help increase knowledge and experience for the reader, so
that we can improve the shape and content of the proposal so that the future can be
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This proposalweadmitthere are still manyshortcomingsdue tothe experience I had very
less. By because we expectit to readers to provide feedback that is constructive for the
perfection of this proposal.

Wassalamu'alaikumwr.wb

Tuban,february 2014

Drafting team

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 The synopsis of the story

There was a man who was living in north sumatra. He lived in a simple hut in a
farming field. The did some gardening and fishing for his daily life.
One day, while the man was do fishing, he caught a big golden fish in his trap. It
was the biggest catch which he ever had in his life. Surprisingly, this fish turned into a
beautiful princess. He felt in love with her and proposed her to be his wife. The man made
the deal and they got married, lived happily and had a daughter.
Few years later, this daughter would help bringing lunch to her father out in the
fields. One day, his daughter was so hungry and she ate his fathers lunch. Unfortunately,
he found out and got furious the daughter ran home and asked her mother. The mother
started crying, felt sad that her husband had broke his promise.

Then she told her daughter to run up the hills because a huge disaster was about to
come. When her daughter left, she prayed. Soon there was a big earthquake followed by
non-stop pouring rain. The whole area got flooded and became toba lake. She turned into
a fish again and the man became the island of samosir.

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 The scenario of the story
[ Toba , a poor boy living in Medan North Sumatra alias with his fishing equipment , on stage . He was
about fishing ]

1.Ramzi : Hi Toba ! How the results of fishing these days ?

2.Toba : nil Ram

3.Ramzi : " wait , , , , , later you can definitely big fish "

4.Toba : " yes Ram

5.Ramzi : baikalah then, my stay was yes ,

6 . Toba : [ Hobo accent ] " From morning to evening so I was fishing , not a single bait fish disaut .
Why no fish eat the bait pancingku ?Oh , Lord, help your servant ... "

7 . [ Toba bait that has been tied to the fishing line . Afterwards sit daydreaming , waiting again ]
8 . Toba : [ The rope tightened stake , mark bait fish eaten , Toba with a surprised expression , deftly
holding the fishing rod ] " Apparently , a large fish which grabbed umpanku . "

. [ Toba pull the fishing line over backwards , until finally a goldfish got sucked by him . ]

9 .Toba : " Fish are great , not bad for a side dish two days . "

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. [ Fish caught by Toba suddenly turned into a beautiful and elegant woman flawless . Toba and
surprised to not believe , at the sight ? ]

10 . Toba : " Daughter of where are you ? From kayangankah ? Elegant once you face . "

11 .Daughter : "Yes , I'm Princess , from heaven , O Youth . I so like this because it was condemned by
the gods for violating rules in heaven . , If I was touched by another creature , then I will change as the
creature .

12 .Toba : " Long story once you , do not understand me . Ah !Anyway , you go home to my house later
you tell me again . "

13 .[ At home Toba ]

14 . Daughter : "Is Brother house ? A mess ! "

15 .Toba : " I'm too busy with other things outside of the house . So , no time to clean the house . I bet
you thought my house was clean and beautiful ?Yes , this is when you live alone . "

16 .Daughter : " Why, brother alone ? youwhere parents , had been invisible ? "

17 .Toba : " They had died 3 years ago . My father died first , then just a month later my mother
followed . Uh , but never mind you do not need to think about . It's already passed . "

18 .Daughter : " I'm sorry . By the way , the name of brother who? "

19 .Toba : " I , Toba . If you are? Uh , wait , you said earlier you were talking of heaven again why you
want the story to be condemned so carp .. I'm ready to hear . "

20 .Daughter : " Ah ! Come on , do not remember anymore . The important thing now , I can enjoy it
like to be a human being . "

21 .Toba : " Yeah , well if you do not want to tell you again . "

[ After being home during the day Toba , the conduct makes the heart young daughter of singles that are
interested . Be , he expresses his love . ]

22 .Toba : " Princess , may I say something to you ? "

23 .Daughter : [nods and smiles ]

24 . Toba : " I do not know , what I feel is right . Hmm , well I mean , we're different social classes .
You're the Princess of heaven .Meanwhile , I am the earth . Hmm ... how? "

25 .Daughter : " Just tell me what you want to say , bang ... "

26 . Toba : " since saw that beautiful and graceful , gentle said you said , . I be in love with you .
Daughter Will marry me? "

27 .Daughter : " All right . I'm willing to terms : Brother should not say about my origins . And if we
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have children later , Brother should not be calling him fry . Because it hurt too . "

28 .Toba : "If it's a problem you do not need to be afraid . This secret will look after well . Come, let me
introduce you to the village

29 .Toba : " Ramzi , come here ! I want to introduce you to my future wife

30 .Ramzi : Candidate 's beautiful wife ,

31.Toba : I feel so lucky

32.Ramzi : name who Toba ?

33.Toba : Her name is Princess Ram ! !

34.Ramzi : tell me , how did you meet him ? .

. Toba : ( with a typical Batak dialect ) " I met him in the next village . story long , I do not forget how I
met with this beautiful woman . I'm a lucky man to marry her . "

Act II

35 .[ Toba and daughter had married and Toba have moved house . ]

36 .Toba : [ still with the hobo thick accent ] " Thank you for what you've given to the Princess . Thanks
to you , I can live in a modern house like this .. Once again thank you , Princess . "

37 .Daughter : " Brother , do not need to hesitate . Importantly , now we are happy . "

38 .Toba : "Yes dear . "

39 .Daughter : [ exert its magic ] " Brother , this is my gift last . After this , my magic will be lost . And ,
I can not give you anything worthwhile again .

40 .Toba : " I definitely use it for things that are useful and not waste it .

Act III

. [ Toba and daughter blessed with a baby boy that is funny . ]

41 .Toba : . Princess, you see our cute kids ' time . "

42 .Daughter : "Yes , . By the way , we are given the name of any child , Bang ? "

43 .Toba : " How about Samosir ? "

44 .Daughter : [ smiles ] " Naidoo , a good name . Suitable for our children , Bang . "

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Act IV

. [ Naidoo grew into a handsome boy , but this kid has a bad habit . This boy eater . This often makes
Toba angry .]

45 . Toba : [ screaming and half- angry ] " Princess, you do not cook today? How are you, do not you
know I'm tired from work.

46 .Daughter : " I'm sorry , Bang . Naidoo had been feeling very hungry .Thus , the provision for the
same edible Abang Naidoo . I 'll make another bang .

47 .Toba : [ still half angry ] Where the Samosir ? Naidoo , where are you ? Ration delicious meal you
have your father 's ? You , know your father is tired , tired , and lethargic . "

48 .Naidoo : " Sorry , Dad . Earlier , Naidoo very hungry . So , eating Naidoo has a father . "

49 .Toba : "Well , sorry dad . But next time , do not repeat ya , understand ? "

50 .Naidoo : "Yes , Father . Naidoo , promise . "

51 .Toba : " Good . "

52 .[ This continued until akhrinya patience Toba has exceeded the limit . ]

53 .Toba : [ angrily ] " Naidoo , what time it was you promised me ? You broke your promise .Now , I
have to punish you . You can not sleep in the house , before you can control the flavor laparmu it ! "

54 .Daughter : [ crying ] " Do not , Bang ! Naidoo was little , if sick how Naidoo , Bang ? What Abang
could not imagine what would happen if the brother did with this Naidoo

55 .Toba : [ still in an angry tone ] " This will happen if the child continues to be pampered . He always
acted as they pleased , not thinking of others .

56 .Daughter : [ plaintively ] " Now it's up to Brother ! If the brother wants to punish Naidoo .Please !
But , my brother had to obey the request . I 'm not evict brother Naidoo from home .

57 .Toba : ( angry somewhat abated ] " Well Naidoo , . Dad does not drive you . , But . During the
week , I will not let you sleep in the room . Place you sleep in the barn .Understand ? "

58 .Samosir : [ crying ] "Yes , Father . Naidoo understand . "

56 .[ Four months passed , Samosir which is free from punishment , still with a habit that often hungry .
This time , the anger Toba already peaked . ]

57 . Toba : [ very angry ] " Naidoo , where are you ? "

58 .Naidoo : " I am here father . There was what Dad called me ? "

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59 .Toba : " Do not ask a lot of you ! Do you eat more food for Dad ? "

60 .Naidoo : " Sorry , Dad ! Earlier , very hungry Samosir , Samosir forced to eat lunch Dad ? "

61 .Toba : [ Naidoo pull the ear lobe as he took her out of the house ] " You know Dad is working in the
fields , to the bone . For who? For you !But , did you eat lunch Ayah.sekarang , no mercy . You know it "
62 .Samosir : [ crying ] " Sorry , Dad ! Naidoo will try not to repeat them . Do not punish Naidoo again
Dad . "

63.Toba : " Already ! No more says sorry for bad boy like you ! Basic scallywag .. Yes you're a
descendant of fish ! "

64 .[ With a cry , Naidoo ran home to her mother at home . He complained to his mother that he was
beaten father . All of the words uttered slur his father told him anyway . Hearing her story , the mother is
sad , especially since her husband has violated his oath to slur words he spoke to his son . ]

65 . Daughter : [ Surprised to hear stories Naidoo ] " My son , what are you honest ? Do not you lie to
me? "

66 .Samosir : [ shakes his head ] " No, ma'am . What I really this juvenile fish , Mom ? Answer, Mom!

67 .Daughter : " Now , Mom asked you to ignore the words of your father . Immediately go up the hill
located not so far from our house and you have to climb the highest tree there on the hill . "

68 .Naidoo : " Well , Mom ! "

69 .[ Naidoo mother 's immediate command . He ran towards the hills is his mother , then climb it .
When looked after by his mother that Naidoo was almost up to the top of the tree to climb up the hill ,
he ran towards the river which is not so far from their home . ]

70 . Daughter : [ as he ran toward the river ] " There is no more that I can trust . Toba has been
betrayed ! "

71 .[ End of story , Princess upon arrival by the river , the sky suddenly darkened , lightning, and the
thunder boomed . Princess then jump into the river . He turned into a big fish again . At the same time ,
the river was flooding down too big and heavy rain . Some timelater , the river has overflowed
everywhere and tergenanglah valley where the river goes . Toba could not save himself , he was
drowned by the inundation of water . Over time , the increasingly widespread waterlogging and turned
into a huge lake . In later days , people call it Lake Toba and small island located in the middle called
Samosir Island . ]

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 The analysis of the story
A.Orientation

There was a man who was living in north sumatra. He lived in a simple hut in a farming field.
The did some gardening and fishing for his daily life.
One day, while the man was do fishing, he caught a big golden fish in his trap. It was the
biggest catch which he ever had in his life. Surprisingly, this fish turned into a beautiful princess. He felt
in love with her and proposed her to be his wife. The man made the deal and they got married,
lived.happily and had a daughter.

B.Complications

Few years later, this daughter would help bringing lunch to her father out in the fields. One day,
his daughter was so hungry and she ate his fathers lunch. Unfortunately, he found out and got furious
the daughter ran home and asked her mother. The mother started crying, felt sad that her husband had
broke his promise.

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C.Resolution

Then she told her daughter to run up the hills because a huge disaster was about to come. When her
daughter left, she prayed. Soon there was a big earthquake followed by non-stop pouring rain. The
whole area got flooded and became toba lake. She turned into a fish again and the man became the
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island of samosir

D.Setting

Place:

Lake,tobahouse,rice field, dining room

Atmosphere ofevents:

Happy,tense and sad

E.Plot

Croanoligial because story sequence, no part of the story back wards

F.Characterization

a.major characters : Toba

b.minor characters : Putri, Samosir&Ramzi

G. moral value

Do not promise if you can not keep

Each face problems do with emotional
Do not speak harshly in front of children

H.Ending of the story

Sad ending because To bareneged on a promise to thedaughter for not saying

abstinence given daughter, when Toba on his word that there was agreat flood that makes
daughter to ldher to climbt he high esthill that is not affected by flooding,
But flooding is too great that the father and mother drown samosir
Became a lakeToba, Samosir in to the middle of the island and the mother fish lake
dwellers

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I.Comment

Arinda: Toba is not a good father, because he was taunting her with the rough samosir

Muzaqi: This story toba lake whose name is so stressed to maintain confidence in the people that
we trust to keep secret

Sitisholichah:Toba type of anemotional and sel fish with his wife and children

Evinurmaya: So patient wifeToba her face attitude that is so grumpy

J.The Crew

a.the characters

Ahmad Muzaqi As Toba

Arinda Gine .T As Princess of fish

Evi Nur Maya As Ramzi

Siti Sholichah As Samosir

b.music director

Evi Nur Maya

c.drama director

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d.scenario director

Internet & Arinda Gine Tendriyani

Closing
Such proposals drama english legend of Lake Toba
Wehopethatthis proposalcouldexpandyour knowledge about folklore legends in
particular Indonesia Lake Toba.
Criticism and suggestions so we needed for the perfection of our drama
For your attentionall we thank you

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