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Aldrich Mojica
Mrs. Larson
English 3 P, Period 2
20 December 2016
Served Warm
Dedication
Foreword
I have always enjoyed reading these types of genre of books. I dont know how or why
but it always interested me into reading more. Hoping to try reading more mystery and criminal
type stories which possibly could be intriguing to me. This story is not intended for everyone as
Prologue
A lonely girl searching for hope arises from the ground as her deepest darkest problems
are hidden behind her innocent face. This teenager, Brianna Mills, lives with her only sibling
which is a brother named Jeremy Mills. Later in her freshman year, she meets her two friends
that are both one of the populars of her school. With a big group known throughout the whole
school. However, they compress into just the three of us to create a small group. The both of
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them still have time to hang out with their other friends but somehow they always made time for
Jeremy Mills (a twenty one year old) and Brianna Mills (a sixteen year old) lived together
on their own with no parents, no roommates, and no guardians Jeremy is legally responsible
for Brianna. As a source of income, they both own a restaurant and bakery named, The Corner
Mills, and it sits on a busy corner of their town. A huge influx of customers enter and exit on a
daily basis in the morning, afternoon, and evening. The menu has food and drinks that fit the
whole day.
Her favorite subject in the entire school-wide courses is Culinary. Her love and passion is
baking and cooking, hence why her company was aspiring and growing continuously. The power
of her talent can create a piece of goodness called food. Nothing can stop how she influences
other people, and coworkers, to feel the food that is made. Lets continue on with her life story in
The bells chimed like the bells on Christmas day, but this time it was the sound signaling
a customer has walked through the doors. The quiet, empty room erupted of one voice saying,
Hello! Welcome to The Corner Mills. The restaurant and bakery was just starting to open up
on this early morning, right before the rush of people needing their bread and coffee. I took a
glance to my left, looking up at the hand clock. Counting the clock to figure out the time, it only
took me a while to see that it is only seven oclock. This is not early for most people, but for me
The new person in training, Adam, was guiding the elderly couple to a booth at the corner
of the room. The couple that walked in is so cute. I dream for that to happen to me in the
future with my husband, two kids, and dogs. Anywho, getting that my future goals that may
The morning was starting out to be a really good one. My brother, Jeremy Mills, actually
woke up this morning and is helping all the staff with the preparations before I can head out to
school. School is important to me and his help with this can get me to get ready early and look
somewhat busy intersection in this town. Plenty of vehicle and foot traffic passing by, which
means we can earn some decent profit. The smell of our delectables can be smelt outside. It
always interested people to take a moment and purchase a pastry or sit down to order.
The interior has a warm and comforting feeling that would have you enjoying the
environment. Newly renovated floors, tables, and technology. Freshly mopped floors that has
light shining from the reflection of the ceiling lights, some attached to ceiling fans.With the
upbeat staff, I can not, not love this place. Arent my sentences the best? Not, not.
It was my brother calling me from the kitchen. What seems to be the problem this time?
Ha ha, youre really funny, he said, I just need your help taking these things to the
front.
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Staring at all the newly baked cookies, cupcakes, brownies, cheesecakes, hot cross bun,
pies, and many other yummy foods. I nodded my head in agreement, starting to carry all the
trays. I placed them on the counter, beside the display shelf that is straight from the main
entrance. One by one precisely putting each one next to each other in organized rows and
columns.
We finally completed our task at hand as I rush to get myself ready to school. Just taking
off my apron to hang it on the proper place. Putting on some mid-priced perfume to cover the
smell of pastries and breakfast meals. Hmm, satisfied as I looked at myself in the mirror. Just a
white plain t-shirt with light washed jeans and white converse shoes. Hair straightened at the
sides of my head. Light makeup on my face just for self satisfaction. Not the best I could do, but
Grabbing my black Jansport backpack and rushing out the door, I shout a quick, Bye
bye! Quickly spreading the double doors open, not waiting nor hearing a response back.
I enter the outside world of the hustling and bustling town. The busy street hearing
honking and yelling of road rage drivers. If only they left their house earlier, they wouldnt be in
such a hurry. The intoxicating smog from all the vehicles can be smelt on the side. I casually
walk on the sidewalk heading towards the school as the smell starts to clear up from my nostrils.
From side to side, I see groups of friends together. I dont really have any friends, in
general. Well a big group of friends I have two, Abigail and Bryan.
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Bbbbrrriiiiaaaannnaaaa!
I hear someone shouting my name from not so far away. Like they were just standing
next to me. Looking to my right, I see bryan (one of the friends I told you I had) walking towards
me from a short distance. He tripped and almost fell making me chuckle and laugh to myself.
Gaining stares from other students not minding their own business. But thats how high
school is, full of nosy people looking for new gossip. Oh, and judgemental people.
I dont look that bad today, I dont think. I actually tried to look good today. Especially
since it was a Monday, the first day of the school week. High five to me! Imagining myself
Acting like Im not fully there, Bryan said, Earth to Bri! Are you there?
Another roll eye moment, I stare at him straight in the eyes, Yes I am.
Ouch! Gosh Bri I just wanted to be a nice person and say hi.
Well, hello.
Walking together side by side like the rows of lockers right next to us. Looking up
towards each lockers, finding the correct locker number. I entered my combination attached to
the contraption, opening the metal box and grabbing the needed notebooks to take my organized
notes in. I love my notes, its so in format and color coordinated. Unless, my pen runs out or I
A he, I hear? How nice, a new douche to add to your popular crew.
The loud, obnoxious bell suddenly rings straight into my ear, interrupting our
conversation slash tiny gossip and causing a minor headache. Luckily, I was saved by the bell
ha jokes!
As I attempted to walk away and get to my first period class in time. I dont want to be
late like I was last Friday. My teacher looked like he wanted to beat me that day.
Umph
I ran into a brick wall. Well, it felt like I ran into a wall. It was just this strong, white, tall,
lean dreamy anyways. Basically, I ran into another student that looks like he was in the same
grade as I was, but I didnt know who he was actually. Dropping my binder onto the floor, thank
goodness not all of my papers fell out. That wouldve been a disaster. Kneeling down to pick it
Did he not feel me bump into him or something? He did look like he had a lot on his
mind. Ill let it pass this time because I was having a good day so far. Not letting the peasants,
The fudging bell rang. Running to my first period trying to not look as exhausted as I
was.
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I huffed to myself quietly. Carefully walking to my seat trying not to trip and make a fool
of myself. These rows of desks and backpacks sprawled onto the floor can be quite tricky.
I sat, kind of slouching at my desk to get myself comfortable for the long period of just
sitting. I looked at the empty desk to my right, figuring it was not empty for even a bit. It was the
same guy who I ran into in the hall I assume. What a coincidence?
I think I was staring too long because all I heard from his lips was a clearing of a throat
Oh, sorry! ...Hi, I abruptly said to the unknown man, I w...as just surprised that
No trouble at all.
I cant believe I stuttered that much. As I worried for a brief moment, he just
nonchalantly stared forward at the teacher. He pays attention to class? Pfft, I bet thats just a first
day thing.
mess up my beautiful notes I tell ya. Drawing a cupcake on the lined piece of paper. Mmm,
What even? He knows I didnt pay attention. Why would I know the answer?
Uh um
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The answer is 2x cubed, 9x squared, plus 18, the guy to my right answered proudly.
First, I finally know his name is Xander. Nice name, good job to his parents. Second,
what is up with everyones attitude this morning? I just want a good day, is that too much to ask?
First period Math finally ended and I could not be any happier than right now. Thank
you, thank you. My prayers have been answered. Exiting the room, going to my next class and
the class after that, and the class after that one.
It was the middle of the day. Which makes it the best part of the whole entire school day
because its lunch Some of you thought I was going to leave school, ha. This was a break from
a majority of the teachers and peers. Some still lingering in the distance.
Brianna Mills.
We both rushed to the lunch lines, before the line got any longer, to grab our green
salads not sure if it was fresh but it was edible. Yes, I know. Typical white girls. We just felt
like a salad today, dont judge. Maybe tomorrow well get a cheeseburger or pizza. Mmm, love
Exiting the cafeteria, into the warm breeze. Loving this California weather. We sat down
where Bryan was sitting. Reserving the spots for us and shooing away his group of friends, all
guys. They annoy me sometimes thats why they dont sit with us. That one day we let them, I
We chatted and ate, just enjoying each others company. That was until a topic that Ive
These two dont know how to quiet down at times. Well end up getting in trouble one
day.
Agreeing with Bryan, Abbey continues to say, Its their fault for listening. Isnt he in
Hes hot duh, arent you somewhat interested in him? You two would look cute
together.
Thanks, but no thanks. I need to focus on my education, get this SAT dealt with, and
I cant believe these two. I wonder why theyre my friends, but theyre my only friends.
Ill deal with them for now. Im kidding, Im kidding. I love them to bits.
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Abbey stop it! We were just talking about him thats why Im staring.
I exaggerated my sigh. Earning stares from neighboring tables. Mores stares, thats all my
peers are good at. Watching and listening thinking it was good gossip. Too bad, guys and gals.
Bryan and Abbey need to take a chill pill and relax. Its just lunch time and theyre
getting all riled up over nothing. These two will be the death of me one day.
Chapter: Culinary
Its the last period which makes it a plus. But the one thing that makes it a bonus is that
its my favorite class out of all my classes. Baking is a winning game as the winning game is
baking. Im mostly, always early to this class because my previous period was nearby. Just a
couple other students in their seats unpacking their stuff, just like me.
But little did I know this one guy Ive been seeing the whole day steps into the room. Mr.
Xander himself, forgetting that he was going to be in this class. Striding to the front of the room
with his ego and confidence. His looks could kill someone.
I can hear all the way from my seat, Hello, you must be the new addition to my class.
Ill seat you next to my best student and the only seat available, Brianna Mills.
I reluctantly raised my hand as Xander went towards my direction. Help me last this
period. He put his stuff on top of the table, relaxing into his seat. Second period with this guy,
and were always sitting next to each other. The real question is, why is the seat next to me
available in both classes he shows up in? The world may never know. But others will say,
Faith! Faith Ill tell ya. Those people just need to calm down.
Ring ring goes the bell. Like my bell impression? Everyone was seated and was ready for
Meaning youll make your own meal that you choose without guidance! It must be a
baked pastry.
Some people sighed, but others was still excited, including myself.
Get to it gentlemen and ladies! The receipe book is on my desk if you need it.
Everyone hustled to their mini kitchens as did I. I saw in the corner of my eye, Xander
Sigh, this is going to be harder than I thought. From all the possibilities we can choose.
Apple pie.
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He even interrupts too. I quickly but steadily wrote the recipe down on a sheet of
notebook paper. This will taste amazing, Im glad he chose the food Ive been craving just this
morning.
Commenting on the list of ingredients and measurements we need. I was frozen in shock
He responded with a grunt and head nod. How lovely indeed. Together, we slowly
worked as a team to complete this assignment. Every single time I try to impress my culinary
Not paying attention to what Xander was doing. I shouldve thought that through because
when I turned to take a glance at what he was doing it was normal. Just for safety measures I
tasted the mixture he was told to do by me earlier. The taste and texture seemed alright to me
for now.
We completed the pie in just the right amount of time. Cutting a slice out and creating a
great presentation with cream and powder on the plate. Yum, looks good already. Xander had a
smirk showing a sign of accomplishment. Must have boosted his ego higher than it already was.
Time is up! Wait patiently for me to check each one of your teams master piece.
Watching Mrs. Andrews circling the room stopping by each kitchen station. From her
facial expressions, you can see her giving a disgusted face, a frown, and a smile. I was anxious to
Looking up after a relaxing mini break, the teacher was standing at the edge of our station
She took the fork on the side of the plate and stabbed it. Gliding the fork off the plate,
you can see the gooey substance in the apple pie slide off deliciously. The crust was crumbling
She took a bite off the fork. Creating an eminent moan of enjoyment. The whole class
started to look where the odd sound was coming from. It was from the teacher. The class started
to get louder with laughter, including Xander. I blushed deep red as they all stared in our
No let me first!
The whole class started to say. Rolling my eyes in my head, Im the one who made this
the most. I should get credit too you know. I could see Xander smirking once again. Not at the
food, not at the class, but at me. Wow, thanks again. Here comes the blush getting redder if that
Half of the class surrounded this mini kitchen. Everyone with forks out trying to get
pieces of the pie. The whole class erupted with moans. Um, this is really awkward and
uncomfortable. I didnt know the food was this good, let alone GREAT.
The bell rang for the last time today. I rushed out of the classroom leaving the pie and
ander to themselves. I needed to get to the restaurant as fast as I can so I can make it to my shift.
Dont want the other staff to think Im not trying and slacking off. Thats the worst judgement to
--
I, Xander, said to myself, So is this pie as good as all the other people are making it?
Taking a bite from the delicious delectable in front of me. It brung back memories of
But it also reminded me of this little girl I knew when I was young. When I was in
elementary school walking on the streets being the little lost self. The pastry that tasted like
Waking up alone on my cold bed in my isolated room at the back of the house. A
peaceful place to be considering all the busy work and school environment. Just somewhere to
relax and relieve all the stress that is bombarding me from society.
My train of thought was interrupted when my brother continuously knocks on the door.
I lightly growled and gave a sigh, Im up, Im up, dont get your panties in a twist.
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After a full minute, he stops knocking on the door which gives me a feeling of relief.
Rolling around on my bed trying to get myself up but I cant. Its like the bed is sucking me in
and the cold is keeping my huddled in the warm, soft comforter blanket. And of course
something has to happen when I start hearing the sound of my doorknob jiggling and twisting
around. The door opens all the way as my brother sprays me with water from a water gun. Out of
all people, he would find a way to unlock my door and bardge in to just wake me up.
Yes now youre awake, he obnoxiously said, Get ready, its a long day today.
Groaning in distaste of his commands telling me what to do. Just to please him, I sat up
He snickered while walking away, probably enjoying the torture he is giving me. Rushing
to get ready, I showered for at least ten minutes, getting the clothes I had the good ones of
course, and the occasional light make up. Looking in the mirror, I looked spot on. Props to my
Exiting my room, I quickly walked to the entrance of the restaurant. Hoping not many
people are waiting for me to assist them with setting up. As I scouted the room, everyone was
working hard by setting up the table, cooking pastries, heating ovens, prepping food, and
Pitching in as a team, we all worked to get the restaurant opened in time. Flipping the
sign to the side where it says, OPEN, and unlocking the doors for the customers to flow inside.
Heading towards the direction of the kitchens, I planned to aid the people at the back with
A couple minutes later, the bell on the door jingled. It wasnt the first time, but for some
reason it made me look up. The sight of Xander entering the double doors of the restaurant made
me fall onto the ground. I was basically crouched below the surface of the kitchen counter to not
be viewed through the open concept kitchen to the front counter. That was a close one, dont
want him to know Im working here. Hell find out more about my life than most people.
Especially finding the truth about why I know recipes and why I smelt like pastries all the time.
Hello! Welcome to The Corner Mills, the new trainee saying the script on point, Are
Im just gonna get some hot cross buns, Xander replied casually, I need to place an
I can see him peeping at the name tag of the newest addition to the Mills team.
No, no, no. I know hes going to get me to help him because Xander chose to place an
order. Where is my brother when I needed him? Sigh, pray for me everyone. Adam takes his
time to walk towards the window where you can talk to the people at the back of the kitchen.
Xander just gave a slight smile back giving an indication of, okay. I start moving
towards the doors to exit the kitchen, letting momentum take its course. I exited the back area,
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looking at a wide eyed Xander staring at my direction. God, please let him not tell anyone my
secret.
Grabbing a binder full of options, I continue staring at the words and pictures printed on
I wanted to pick a cake, somethin a girl would like. Maybe... with strawberries on it?
A cake for a girl? Who would he buy it for? His girlfriend? Maybe his sister, yeah or
mom.
Yeah, yeah. That is one tasty cake, he wondered for a bit, Could you add a name on it
too?
Courtney.
Courtney? Okay, I questioned while thinking if Courtney even went to our school.
Him telling me the date he would like to pick it up, I placed his order in our roster and
computerized system. With a short, goodbye and bye, he left the restaurant making the bells
jingle once again. Exhaling, releasing a breath that I didnt know I was holding. Looking at
Adam, I can see him snickering to himself while he watched the whole situation. Damn, he
I quickly left the room, blushing bright red, returning to the kitchen to continue on the
stock checks. What an eventful ten minutes to be honest. Highlight of my day for sure.
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I was supervising the afternoon today so I took a longer slumber. Possibly for a restless
night of watching Netflix and reading books last night. Shouldve not done that and saved it for
the next day. Whenever I wake up near the middle of the day, I feel as if I wasted half a day.
Ill get over it eventually. Right now Im just here at the front counter, making sure my
staff is doing okay. I trust them so its not that bad. Some of them are even older than me,
chuckling to myself.
Looking over to the cash register, I see my helping him out. He sees me staring so he
This shocked me a ton. I became frantic in my head, but remained composed outside. I
can feel my head pulsing from my conscious screaming at me! This is so nerve racking.
I heard a snicker and a chuckle, assuming that was Xander standing over there. Sigh, I
didnt know it would feel this stressful. Its like trying to finish a book, or even taking a final.
Im really triggered.
Here you go, sir! The cashier, Roberto, on duty piped up.
Thank you, Xander inspected the box, But you forgot to write the name.
Im so sorry about that! Let me fix it for you, Roberto said and grabbed the receipt to
I guess now it was Xanders turn to stare. I gave him the side eye, giving a questioning
facial expression.
Nothing. Just copying what you did to me. Enjoying the sight while I do it, he
Youre all set, Roberto said, coming back to the hunky hunk.
When Xander turned around and went half way towards the exit doors. My inner
thoughts came out, maybe my desperate needs. No, I dont have the baby fever.
Have fun with Courtney, I said, with attitude and sass intended.
Oh, nothing! You know, your little toy youre trying to please.
This cake, he pointed at the box, ...And this person named Courtney, is my little sister
I gasped, shocked that it was his sister. I knew it was not a girl! Well I kind of did and
In that moment, I was relieved to hear the bells on the door jingle. That meant he left the
I hear another set of chuckling! Im just a laughing stock. I go look at the general
He just smiled, knowingly that I knew it was the most embarrassing moment that he has
seen of me.
Chapter: Football
We were seated at our usual table during lunch, when Im trying to eat the food I packed
for myself. Abbey has been persuading and tempting me to go to the football game tonight. Her
words and constant nagging has been making me sway towards going. She even used Xander as
a way to make me go to the game (how triggering) because when he transferred to this school he
Bryan even ended up pitching into her persuasion, Yeah, go with us Bri. Itll be fun!
The whole school day passed by quickly because its already the end of the period. Bell ringing
and everything, students flooded the hallways making it all cramped. Meeting the two people I
call my friends at my locker. Unpacking and packing the things I dont need and need for the rest
of the day.
Woo, fun fun. How can I evvverrr forget, I sarcastically questioned back at her.
All of them walked away heading towards their cars to leave me behind and head home.
Well, Ill see them later today anyways. I put my backpack back on and headed to the outside
world. Leaving this jail behind, even though Ill be back for the game.
Out of my luck, it starts raining. Good thing Im wearing my camo green jacket. Here
comes Xander walking towards his group of friends near the end of the outside hallway where
Once I was done checking my phone, it was the same time Xander was ready to leave
too what a coincidence. We started walking in the same direction. Is faith trying to tell me
something or can I just walk home in the rain? I open my umbrella walking straight to the
But what the heck, Xander was not even wearing a hood over his head or even holding an
umbrella. Hes going to get sick! Out of instinct of caring for people, I walk up next to him and
I said, You seemed like you needed to be covered if-if only you want of course?
A full on smile! Geepers! I started to act very concerned,Why arent you covering your
Okay mom, I just forgot to dress for a rainy day, his words caused me to blush.
I frantically said, I didnt mean to say it like that! I was just worried is all.
Most likely I am, my friends are forcing me, I said, with a small smile attached to the
Its going to be fun. My team and I are going to beat them. Gonna be a blast.
Of course, were the winning team at the end of the night. I hope I see you there?
Fine, fine. Ill goooo. Ill try so you can see me?
Same. Same.
We walked in silence together until he had to split roads to go to the other direction. I
I actually had another full on conversation with the boy outside of school. One step ahead
of what I actually thought I would be with him. What am I even saying? Its just one
The sky seemed to clear up. Both my two friends cheered in excitement and high fived
each other. Having smiles on their faces being proud that they finally made me agree to their
My friends and I were sitting in the student section together, mixed with most of our
peers surrounding us. The atmosphere was so upbeat with cheering and laughing and
conversations and overall positive vibes. The occasional people doing waves and body surfing.
Of course, the administrators got mad about the body surfing, haha.
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Sometimes when we did chants, I just awkwardly stood on the bleachers like a rose in a
field of dandelions on a warm, windy day. I somewhat new the words but Im not much of a loud
The game was over. WE WON! WOO! GO SCHOOL! Haha, that was a funny shout
school. Ha! That was veryyy funny. My two friends and I stayed a little after, sitting in the
bleachers. Of course we were taking pictures to remember this amazing day. Especially Mr.
Later on in our photoshoot, I see Xander peeping his head out from the entrance to the
bleachers.
I was so confused, Abbey was having a wide smile, glad that she said that.
Oh my gosh Abbey look what youve done, she just continued smiling. Today was full
I quickly side stepped and jumped over the bleachers to head down the endless rows.
Gosh, we were so high up in the stands. I could just see smiling staring at me in awe. Wow,
thanks buddy.
I guess someone needs a lift, he said, grabbing me and pull me over his shoulder.
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He just laughed to himself. Carrying me all the way to his car. Thank god it wasnt
raining or I wouldve been wet by now. Opening the door two his car, he just sets me in the
passenger seat and buckles the seatbelt for me. I feel like a princess right now, Im aweing. He
runs to the driver side door and quickly enters to start the engine.
He drives in the direction of my house as I give him directions to input it on his phone.
The sound of the GPS fills the car instead of silence. We start short conversations about how our
day was, what we did on the weekend, what we will do when we get home, and so many other
I had a nice time at the football game, you actually got our school to win, I said.
Night Xan.
Thats when we just stared for a little bit. But after a few seconds I got back to reality and
opened the door and rushed out heading to my front door. The front porch light is open just for
me, because if it was off I wouldnt be really be able to see where the key slot is. As I open the
door, I hear the car start to speed off. At least I knew he was waiting until I got inside my
house especially if I got myself locked out. That wouldve been so embarrassing.
Panting, sweating the sweat off my forehead as I walked, jogged, than sprinted home. I
was scared of many things that came out of the night. The walk from the schools football game
frightened me from the possums crawling around, the occasional dark alleys, and random people
Slamming the door of my comforting and safe home. Breathing in the intoxicating scent
of dinner. Sniffing more to find out what was prepared, it was was Chicken Alfredo Pasta and
garlic bread. Imaging the savory taste in my tongue made my mouth water from excitement. I
Im home brother!
Strolling across the living room, I entered the dining room. An open concept house was
the best because you could see all over your house. From the living room, to the dining room,
and even the kitchen. It was a nice space and a nice house to live in because of the area. The
restaurant of ours had us with a decent amount of money but a ton of stress. I love it when we
The small chandelier above the dining table lightened up the room. The food was clearly
just cooked as you can see the light beaming at the food showing the smoke rising from the pots
and plates. Table mats, plates, and utensils were waiting for me to use them and satisfy my
hunger.
Jeremy was seated already seated as if he was waiting for me to come home. He was just
on his phone, perhaps strolling through his Instagram feed. I pulled out the chair across from
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him, creating a squeaky sound when you drag the chair across a wood floor. The floor was even
cleaned too! He mustve done this before I got home. Good job for him.
My brother and I glanced at each other, smiling because we know what we want to do
right now. We grabbed our plates and started to gather the food onto our plates. Some white
people food of course, we got a bowl of green salad, Chicken Alfredo, and garlic bread. Diving
into the food, but we forgot to check how hot the food was when we stuffed it into our mouths.
Spitting out the food onto our plates as our tongue started to burn and have that sensation.
Having a family moment we chuckled to ourselves. Sighing from relief, I really really
missed these moments because we rarely get to have them. A stress free time, a time full of
memories. Checking the temperature of the pasta with our hands hovering over them. Carefully
stabbing it with our forks, double checking if it was hot my the touch of the lips to the food. Safe
to say, we shoved it in our mouths and chewed on it like no tomorrow. The food was really good,
Around ten minutes later, we were stuffed. Like on the brim of having our stomachs
explode onto the table. We were all smiles of how satisfied we were.
He walked slowly to the kitchen because of how full he was. I had a light chuckle from
how he walked but I could relate to be honest. When he came back, I see him carrying a plate
with a cover on top to hide the contents inside. Seeing a smirk forming on his face, I was excited
to what he was going to reveal. Opening the cover slowly, I gasped. It was my favorite dessert in
the world. Strawberry Angel Cake with a side of strawberry ice cream. As he placed the plate on
the table, I went in on cutting a piece for myself and scoping a cup of ice cream on the side. The
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room filled with my moans of delight when I continued to eat the most beautiful creation on
Earth.
My brother was giving me weird looks and stares. He already knows I love it, why is he
giving me that attitude? Ha, ha, whatever big bro, you made this happen.
A phone rang from across the table, ding! I mustve left it here earlier. Approaching the
phone as it was still lit up. I stared down on it, releasing it was a text from Xander. How did he
Knowing he meant the game, I responded back, Np. Supporting the school was fun.
You did great too, finishing off the game with a touchdown beating. Bye, bye rivals.
Ye, gotta do what I got to do to beat those, he finished off the text with tons of
profanities.
Good night.
Chapter: Nightmare
I repeated what I said, but no response was given. It was late at night and I heard some
type of commotion downstairs. Somehow Im back at my old house when we had a big house
some people even say its a mansion but I disagree. The other houses in the neighborhood that
was doubled this size. Of course, this rich neighborhood was a gated community with security
and everything.
Clanging of a variety of metal sounds and strange shouting of a group of men erupted
from the kitchen. Now I was very confused, more than I was when I got up. Still half asleep, I
carefully walked down the stairs. Almost falling at the last step, I somehow steadily balanced my
I hear fast footsteps rushing to the back of the house, hearing the grunts and shouts of,
Lets get a move on! We have to leave NOW! The heavy steps that sounded of big, buff men
faded away in the distance. Entering the kitchen was a major shock to my whole body. I couldnt
move, I couldnt look away. I just stared straight at the floor, where two bodies of middle aged
people were.
I screamed so loud, I was too scared of what was happening. I couldnt handle this right
now, I wasnt prepared. I hear someone rushing down the staircase coming quick to the
kitchen for sure my brother because that is the only other person at the house currently.
My brothers eyes bulged out basically trying to escape his face. Mouth gaping open like
someone just killed his parents. Oh wait, the people on the floor ARE my parents. My mommy
and daddy, I cannot believe this. Who would do something like this?!?
All I hear now is the sound of my brother panicking over the phone and police sirens
coming closer.
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The world felt like it was tumbling down. Boulders, trees, skyscrapers falling down on
top of me. My chest feeling like an accordion being squeezed, releasing all the air inside of them.
From all the running, shouting, chattering, my brother approached me. Hugging the life
out of as I sob into his chest. Wetting his whole shirt, sniffling in the process.
Six months later, after the incident with no answered questions. The home phone rang, it
was the local police department. They called to say that they have bad news to tell us, so only my
The police have closed the case, they couldnt find any evidence to support a case.
My brother sat with me on the side, spilling the information he got from going to the
police station.
Another day, another drug deal that needs to be taken place. My gang is losing profit in
our sales because of the other gang in town. Its not their territory and its pissing off all my
brothers.
confrontation with the gang. The apartment smells of dirty laundry and spoiled food filled my
nostrils as I FELT it go in I gagged a little. Setting a reminder in my head to get this place
cleaned up because it is an utter mess. Clothes spilled across the couch. Takeout food containers
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and left overs sprang across the floors, tables and counters. Small cracks on the walls telling a
Grey smoke can be found circulating the air in the living room, leaving remnants of what
occurred in this very room. The bitter scent of alcohol which the scent can be found outside this
building. The beer bottles littered across the floorboards, furniture, and our potted plants we
added those plants for the apartment to look a little alive and decorated? Just go with it. From
outside, you can hear the sound of our neighborhood partying it up at this time of the night.
Preparing for this successful night with my dark black clothes black jeans, black shirt,
black baseball cap I got freshly out of the shower, ready to step out of my house and get ready
for the night. Woo! Let me get pumped up because Im dead inside when am I not to be
honest.
I got in my matte black vehicle yes, that is black too, if you got the message, I like
I approach the only door lit from a single light above it. It was a door that was innocent as
it held everything dark and illegal inside. Nice door, I picked it myself.
Knocking on the door, a person jokes with me inside asking who I was. Obviously there
is a camera above that can see me. Thats why I put it there so its more convenient a safer for
us. I stick up a middle finger at it, making sure the person looking at it gets the message.
The door opens and I rush inside the room to see who is messing with me at this time.
Nothing boss, just getting ready for our whole team to go to this big deal that may go
wrong, I said.
As I see everyone heading to the garage with the vans and trucks, they must be almost
done prepping for what is ahead of us. Guns can be heard reloading and being reloaded. Thats
Everyone stared in my direction as they should be. Im the big guy here, if you havent
realized already.
Tonight I want it to be successful, perfect, and smooth. This is the time we have to get it
right. Be prepared to shoot when its time. Lets hope we dont but we have to act like they do.
Grunts, nods, and uproar can be heard. The agreements and cheers fill the small space.
Lets do what we have to do men. This will lead to a good pay tonight, with some good
The men dispersed and hustled to leave the facility. Inhaling the exhaust of the vehicles
that were rushing out of here. Coughing in the process. I shouldve left the room. Silly me.
I arrive on location, parking my car beside the curb. Ill be the one handing off the drugs.
Stepping outside the car into the night life. Drunk people roam the streets, tumbling over
themselves, making me chuckle. Ahh, clumsy people. Walking straight into a dark alley, two
men were awaiting me with a briefcase. Thats my money! Carrying the duffel bag with me, I
have the stash of what theyre looking for. The necessity to their lives.
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Before I can approach them within arm distance I see something shining that they
begin to take out. As they raise their guns out to point at the direction that I am at, my men shot
Their guns go off too, but hopefully it only pointed down. I didnt feel any pressure or
Acting all high and mighty of myself, I walk back in the direction I came. But when I
turn around, theres something very different. Very distinct to the human eye that frightens my
sight. It was the eyes of someone who lies deep in my heart. The one Ive gotten attached to
Calling my partner in crime, the person I rely on. This has to be done today, right now.
Holding it in is so painful, living like this is so difficult. Its better now than it randomly coming
out from my mouth, or even worse from another person maybe her friends.
Chilling on my bed, attempting to calm down my nerves because I feel it in me, its not
going to turn out the way I want it to be. It has to be done. The doorbell rings, my eyes
I have to confess something with you. I know youre not going to handle it good, so I
think you should sit down. I said. Not knowing might cause her to feel guilty, guilt might lead
Im dreading this moment a ton. The weight on my chest is so heavy, its live a TV
hanging off a building. A person being scared of heights and being heavy, dang that is stressful.
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Im in a gang. You did see that happen last night, I said, hesitating a bit.
Her eyes widened immediately, jaws dropping. That is the sight I do not want to see. She
Uh, uh. I need to go. I dont think this can continue, she said frantically.
The words I hate to hear. I cannot let this happen, but nothing can let me go and chase
Chapter: Heartbroken
I cannot believe he said that. I was hoping of good news, but this my head is hurting
My hatred towards him was like a skyscraper slowly burning down by a fire created by a
gas explosion on a sunny day during a heat wave. While he is trying to fix this situation by using
one small fire truck trying to stabilize the blaze with one hose. Basically, I dont have my hopes
up.
A night walk, just what I needed to TRY to clear my mind. Hence the word try, because
Brianna wont get out of my head. Im still shook over this whole situation. I didnt choose this.
I continued on walking down the street, inhaling the air filled with gas fumes but the flow of the
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cool breeze was quite relaxing. Not many cars were. The thing, more of a person, stopped
Those blonde wavy hair that always catches my attention. Her bright blue eyes shining in
the night. The colors of her outfit bringing out her inner personality. It was her I saw... my
Brianna. This is the moment Ive been waiting for. For her to be alone and I can finally talk to
I gently but urgently grabbed her biceps, pulling her into a dark alley. She let out a loud,
With the amount of screaming, I tried to stop her so she wouldnt gather more attention,
She screamed frantically, Dont kill me! Dont kill me! Pleaseeeeee.
That made me so scared, I dont want her to look at me like a killer. Im a human being
Im not going to kill you! Just stop it. Stop shaking, I said.
Dont kill me!!! Ahhhh, she fidgeted around trying to get away from my grasp.
Life is just a game and this game has rules to follow. But, some people dont follow
those rules and start attacking me. This makes me want to defend myself even if it goes out of
those rules, I tried to explain to her with full passion. She needs to understand what Im trying
to get at.
She stared at me. Nothing else, she just looked into my eyes. It was kind of scaring me
even more than when she was calling me a murderer. The banters, the crying, the screaming, the
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thrashing, were too much to handle for me at this second. If only she loved me the way I love her
I was a man alone in the world, trying to gain back the light of my world. Without this
bright light, my world is dark. Emptiness fills inside me, my inside fills with emptiness. Poof.
Do you ever realize that the people around us doesnt care about our existence, our
Ive been mopping alone in my room. Struggling to even get up. Im so down, I felt so
Finishing up the stocking needed for the next day, I was waiting for the new applicant
that was supposed to be arriving this afternoon. My brother told me that he was a teenager that
goes to a school across the town from mine. I didnt know we needed more people employed
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here, but with the increasing amount of customers, it is surely needed. I heard footsteps heading
my direction, while I was at the back still signing off the clipboard.
One of the employees, named Meghan, peeking her head into the back area asked, Do
The occasional ringing of the bell when a person enters happens often. The teenager that I
Hi! Im here for an interview, said the man. He was an eye catcher.
Sure! Ill get the manager right out for you, she said.
Quick footsteps vibrated the floor, feeling that Meghan was anticipating this moment.
She told me the man was here, so I quickly cleaned up the area so I can talk with this guy.
Stepping out of the back, going towards the man. I said, Hello! Im Brianna, one of the
Hello to you too. Im Cameron, he said. He stared at me, looking me up and down.
Your application looks great. Im just going to ask you a few questions.
Great!
Everytime I come here, I feel like this is home. Plus, the food is amazing. This is a great
first time job that can help me in the future. Just starting out. And also the people who work
He gave me a smirk with those side glimpse. Is he flirting with me during this interview?
Im applying for the front crew position. I expect to be helping customers with food
options, serving, dealing with cash, cleaning. Hopefully working with you, he said, smiling
Wow, okay I can deal with this. His flattery feels welcoming. Its like Ive known him
before. I continue on with the interview, knowing his short but flirty remarks back with each
response he gives.
I said, That concludes our interview. You have been accepted to work with us! Youll be
No problem, come tomorrow, which is Sunday, and well give you your orientation and
training. Goodbye!
Okay! Thats fine, see you tomorrow, he said as he exits the building.
Exhaling a breath that apparently I was holding in. But before I can stand up, Meghan
Omg omg omg, he was so hot right? He was totally flirting with you girl.
She squealed going back to her work station as she saw that customers were streaming in
and waiting in line at the register. Lets see how tomorrow turns out.
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Good morning! Rise and shine, its time to train the new boy. Regardless how it is, lets
Already setting up the newbies station in the morning. Ive got all this set up for him
ready for him to tackle all the scenarios that he might have to face.
Im already waiting in the dining area. Not too long, I heard the doors open and seeing
He nodded, I directed him to the direction that he will be taught. I teached him the basic
ropes. How to use the register. Counting the money. What to do when theres a robber. How to
bag the food. Reloading the stacks of cups, lids, straws. I continued to get him to learn all the
things I needed him to have the knowledge of. This is a day where I can have him do whatever.
But not that I didnt expect it, he obviously flirted and I was totally flattered with that.
At the end of the day for him, which was technically still the afternoon. He didnt do bad
at all. He was a great listener and quick at his feet. I liked him Im talking about his skills! Not
I could tell. He was already tired and exhausted from what tasks I had him to do. Full of
responsibility of course. A job comes with that. The stress and the hassle of going quick and
Bright and early this weekend. A feeling of warmth and cold mix together as I lay on my
bed with blankets wrapped around me in a comfortable position. I checked my phone to see if I
got any messages or notifications from anyone but I dont know much people so who knows.
Somehow, I have one text message. Its from Xander! He was texting me how we should meet
up for lunch because he has to tell me something important. Ugh, I cant wait!
From the nightmare I had, it would be a relaxing lunch date with Mr. Xander himself. I
wonder where hes taking me. This place must have good food because Im quite hungry if I do
say so myself.
Good morning Brianna! Youll be supervising the morning shift, said my brother.
I said, Fine, Ill do it but you have to fill in after the morning because I have plans this
afternoon.
I quickly got read for the day, but of course Im going to change my clothes later today.
Getting prepared for just the morning, I rush towards the restaurant and bakery with my feet. I
cant drive yet and I dont have a bike well I do but like its in the back with a flat tire and
everything.
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Entering the building, I hear a welcoming Hello! As I search for the person who said it,
it was the new guy. Aw, hes already getting with the flow on how to always welcome the
customer.
I nod in acknowledgment as I head to the back and enter an office to access the computer.
Checking inventory and delivery, I hear a manly voice I surely recall from before and of
I hear rushing in the back of the cashier station, most likely Cameron trying to figure
I was preparing the hot cross to show Cameron as an example. He was standing fairly
close, but I didnt mind at all. Well, until I heard a scary growl.
I looked at Cameron and his eyes looked like it would shoot out of his eyes. I scooted
slowly away from me, creating a gap between us. We all know hes scared now, more than me
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even. Continuing my demonstration to teach him how to do hot cross buns, I can still tell he was
nervous.
I left Cameron alone to finish his duties as I head to the kitchen to clean up the materials.
I hear
grunting and a loud whisper of Xander telling Cameron to not touch me and to keep a distance.
Walking alone, going down a dark alley in the worst neighborhood in town. The only
light shining in the narrow street, aims towards this one door. The door into the darkest secret of
Thump, thump. I bang my fists against the door to alert the people inside to get me inside.
A speaker on the side of the door starts talking, Who? I dont have an idea why they are asking
when theres a camera right there we can see. Theyre just messing with me.
Chill bro, just messing with you a bit, the person on the other side responded.
The door started to making a buzzing sound so I abruptly twist the doorknob and push the
Next time if you open the door for someone, dont walk in front of that door, I said.
He was one of my best mates on the block, his name is Mason. Might not be the sharpest
He chuckled, thinking I didnt get the joke but I just wanted to give him attitude for
already messing up my entrance. Shots can be heard from afar. I guess were practicing our
I head upstairs into a room designated for a shooting range. A makeshift area but itll do
justice for our purpose. We need to train, were not going to die from other people and gangs.
We need to thrive through this together as a family, as one unit. Defend our territory. Need to
As I took a break and laid down on the couch in our little rest area. One of our older
gang members was just chilling there, resting himself. Beer in one hand and an empty hand on
the other waving around. Hes telling the people in the room a story about his adventure.
Somehow he ended up talking about stabbing a person but the twist is that butterflies came out
of the persons stomach. I dont know if he was just drunk or was telling the truth. But freaking
Interrupting my focus in this weird story conversation. I feel my phone vibrating. Must a
text notification from someone. I look at my phone thinking its someone unimportant that I can
look at later. BUT, it was actually Brianna. Hmm, what a nice surprise.
I opened the message and shes telling me that we need to talk. That is not an issue at
Authors Note
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Thank you for the readers who have read this novel. This was my first attempt to creating
a full storyline of Brianna. The police information presented can be given credit to the Explorer
Program of the La Palma Police Department. My job experience at Carls Jr. helped enhance my
capabilities to write about the food industry. Bagging food and ringing up customers.
Special thanks to my cousin, Pauline Aragon, for supporting and motivating my mental
brain as it tries to come up with idea. Also, helping me into thinking of more ideas and using
some scenes that youve thought and written it in my own words while extending it to be stitched
into my novel.
Other thanks to people who have been supporting me through this rough experience. Lots
of people have helped me gain ideas, from group chats to other novels.
Thank you.
The bell rang echoing around the whole restaurant. It was not that loud because we were
just one hour in opening this early morning. The sun has just rose a couple hours ago and were
already serving breakfast for the early comers. Not much is going on, all the staffers and myself
are still getting the restaurant adjusted for the later hours. The sound of the bell rang again.
Where did the hostess go? Ugh, whatever. Let me just go and get this customer dealt with.
Hello! Welcome to The Corner Mills, I said energetically with the most positive attitude I
could give. I just need a table for one today, replied the elderly lady in front of me. I directed
the woman to her table and the waiter arrived, ready to serve her. I love my staff, theyre just like
my family. Even though this restaurant was created by my father, they dont really manage this
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workplace. School, work, sleep, finances, eating, cooking, homework, projects, essays, and
socializing but I dont even have that much friends. My friends are my co-workers, theyre all
I have and its the best I could get so far. I dont really get along with the people at school
because I dont really match my peers. With the work situation Im currently in, I dont really
have time. Ive designated higher positions for some of my workers, but I worry everyday for
that small restaurant in this town. That is the only way my family, myself, and my mothers
medication can get paid for. Im struggling so hard to get profit out of this town, I just need to
help my family even though my family doesnt need me. They dont really care for me, help
me, and cheer me on. Its just me and this restaurant fighting through life, I guess. For some
reason I hear the voice of the manager I just promoted shout to me, Hey Keegan!! I trudged
along to the sound of the voice which lead me towards the kitchen. What did you need Hanna
and tone it down youre so loud, I questioned from her abrupt and loud yelling in this quiet
restaurant. This cash register is not working. These two gentleman need to hurry to class. I
looked to my right and see these teenagers being occupied on their phones. I dont think theyd
mind just a couple minutes, I chuckle, Let me just reboot it and see what happens. I powered
the computerized register off and wait a couple minutes to restart. Sigh, this might take a while.
One of the teens went up to me, Um, excuse me. Can we pay now? Class is about to start?
Sure, youre lucky the register just started up. Hanna ringed them up and gave them their
baked goods and rushed out the door. Mmm, the aroma of the baked goods and breakfast meals
starting to get stronger and stronger which causes me to be in delight. This job is my home,
and I care for it a lot. This is my get away from everything. Buzz buzz goes the vibration of my
iPhone 6s. Who is texting me right now?!? I looked down at my phone and it was just a reminder
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that I had school. Damn it, I thought it was actually someone. Whatever, need to rush to school
now, I dont know why those two teens were rushing so early. Plenty of time for them to get to
class but thats none of my business. Hanna Ill be going now, need to get my studies on, I
notified her just in case she doesnt see me walk out. She replies with her sarcastic but friendly
remark, Your outfit got me shook! Learn lots and be safe! Gosh, Hanna always brightens up
my day. With my adidas pants, stussy hoodie, and a matching adidas shoes to go along with the
whole flow which were gifted to me by one of my co-workers during my recent birthday. A
chilly but satisfying weather this morning getting me all happy for just school? That doesnt
sound like it. Its a Monday and I should be stressed out and worried by now but I guess
Chapter One
I blinked for a quick moment in time. The room filled my eyes. The room felt warm and
cozy, just like a welcoming home. It was my familys diner prepping for the long day ahead. A
small, but adorable little place on the corner of a busy neighborhood street which I was basically
managing.
Basically my own company but it was founded by my father, Tristan Mills, to help raise
his family with the right amount of money. However, he slowly walked away from the company
after my mothers major illness. He started to separate from the family which consisted of my
mother Anna Bose, my brother Jeremy Mills, and lastly myself. Anyways, my mother is
suffering through an illness that messes up her mind and cannot think correctly. She has two
personalities, one that has the motherly touch to it and the other one that scares me so much. I
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always hope for the first personality because the second one is a lot to handle with the stress I
already have.
The bell ringing from the double door entrance awakes me from my daydream. Heyyyyy
Keegan, a voice exaggeratedly shouts which echoes through the walls into all the rooms. As I
am exiting the kitchen, walking towards the owner of that sound. Oh, hi Hanna, I respond with
my inside voice that she surely did not use. The manager, Hanna, walks inside the break room
clocking in for the day. The scanning noise registers through my ears as she scans her work ID.
Washing her hands, she prepares to start with the baked goods. A whole display was empty and
needed to fill quick if were going to sale delicious goodies for the first couple customers.
All the other staffers thats scheduled to work today have already walked in already
setting up for the rush of people wanting breakfast. Mmm, I can smell the aroma of baked
cookies, cupcakes, honey buns, hot cross buns, cheese danish, croissants, with breakfast burritos,
ham and cheese sandwich, variety of crepes, hash browns, pancakes, and french toast. Everyone
continues to cook and prep tables before we open the restaurant and be bombarded with
customers.
This time I hear an alarm ringing. What is this annoying alarm? Oh wait, its my phone
ringing telling me to go to school. Ugh, its that time of the week Monday. Right on time,
my older brother Jacob walks into the room. Jacob, its your turn to supervise the restaurant, I
have to go to school now. He replies with a positive, but somewhat sarcastic remark, Fine by
Thats my queue to leave everyone alone. Grabbing my plain, black Jansport backpack
that my brother gave me for my birthday over the summer, followed by running out the double
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doors with my arms stretched out. Not forgetting to turn the sign notifying everyone were open
to serve. The bustling neighborhood with car engines roaring through the streets. The occasional
with their group of friends. If only I knew how it feels like to be surrounded with a big group of
Chapter Two
The obnoxious school bell rung signaling the next class. The narrow hallway with
students crowding the area. Filling the hallway, having barely any space to get anywhere. From
little shoulder and elbow bumps, it gets kind of awkward. People chatting can be heard as you
continue through the corridor. Shouting can be heard from different sections, sometimes even
classrooms. Almost slipped on a tiny puddle of water needing to be cleaned off the floor. That
shouldve been gone before the passing bell rung. I strolled to my next period hoping no one
would come up at me. After a couple minutes walking across campus, I finally reach my
destination. Almost tripping on the way to my seat, I spread out some of my materials on the
table. Ring ring goes the bell again. Time to begin my favorite period, Culinary!
Hello class! We have a new student joining us today, announced Mrs. Andrews. All the
qq2 male species in the class began to make whistling sounds and sexual remarks as she was
talking. To be honest, it was quite uncomfortable for me. Please welcome Abigail Johnson! She
Abigail just stood still. Just smiling with delight staring around the room, taking
everything in. Hey everyone! The school experience has been great so far, she energetically
said. Gosh, that calming voice gets me everytime. Wait, why did I just think that?
You can go sit next to Keegan, the teacher faced me, Keegan raise your hand.
Abbey I mean Abigail started to walk in my direction. Of course faith had to put us
together and have her sit next to me. The only open seat in the class because my partner dropped
out of this class for not knowing anything and messing up several times.
Somehow I ended up dropping my pen, ugh clumsy me. Reaching for the object on the
floor, she beat me to it. Our hands brushed sending shocks through me. What is happening?
Heres your pen. I drop mine all the time, she lightly jokes, trying to make a
conversation.
response.
Breaking me from my trance, a loud voice goes through the whole classroom. Okay
students! We will be baking today, how exciting!! You can make whatever you desire, but it has
to be edible and creative. Everyone just stared at the teacher all hushed. Some students smiling
because we can bake delicious goodies this afternoon. You will be graded for your baking
skills, of course. Make sure you do it correctly, but also have a good time with this experience.
Everyone in class separated in their designated spots. Room fills with chatter and
discussion of the students deciding what to bake or cook. Ugh, what should we cook? Or should
A girl voice interrupts my train of thought, Sooooo what are we doing? She eyes the
mini kitchen station wondering where everything and what was what.
Do you like hot cross buns? I asked, but she just nodded her head no.
I gave another option that I was really liking right now, How about an apple pie? Im
sort of craving it. She gasps with delight I hope, Yes! I love apple pie mmm.
Grabbing a sheet of paper, I scribble on the paper the ingredients, measurements, and
temperature for all the things needed to make this assignment perfect. With the fast writing to get
this food ready, I looked slightly to my right looking at a girl with wide eyes.
Oh my, whats this? Are these the ingredients? How do you even know them? The
quick questions being thrown at me with such shock. I responded with a straight answer, but not
fully correct. My older brother loves apple pie and I bake him this pie on special occasions or
when he asks me. That makes sense. The things you know about this, I bet it would taste
amazing! Her positivity directed towards me. The happiness in her eyes feel like shes covering
something, but I just brush it off thinking its nothing to worry about.
The preparation didnt take long. Five minutes everyone! Presentation should be spot
on, and of course the food. The teacher interrupts me with an announcement and a light
chuckle. As I was saying, the amount of time heating, baking, and preparing wasnt that time
consuming. The process was fun, the aroma of the different foods intoxicated the whole room.
Now were just adding some icing on top of the apple pie to give more of a taste. I rarely
see people do this but it gives more of a flavor. In addition, its a great design to display for the
finishing product.
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Now it was time for the grading! The culinary teacher circled the room, stopping by each
station to look at the presentation and flavor of the finishing product. Some smiles of pleasure
from some students, but others a frown telling them it was tasteful or edible.
The clipboard tapped the counter, making my senses come back to full. Now to my
favorite student. What do you have for me today Mr. Mills? She eyes the pleasant object right
Uh, we decided to make an apple pie. I had responded to her question. Thinking that
was the answer she was looking for. She grabbed the fork and stabbed it like a starving person.
Another school day, another culinary class. This time were making any type of meal that
includes noodles! I was so excited, Ive been craving pasta. Mmm, pasta.
The teacher said, Class, go to your stations and prepare your area and set your
ingredients. Write down the recipe, grab the ingredients, and get your pots and pans.
She taught a brief lesson on safety and how to cook the noodles evenly. Some people
were confused, others were understanding, but for sure I was well knowledged about these types
Okay! Thats all you need to know, you have enough time to complete this assignment.
If you have any questions, come up and ask me. Ill be at my desk.
Yes! I can satisfy my craving now. Before I can start dreaming about the types of foods
A couple minutes passing by, you can hear the rustling metal sound of pans from students
as the time starts to lessen. Rushing to finish, Abigail and I moved around the mini kitchen like
zoo animals. I dont even know if were going to finish. From all the time it took for cooking
We all both went to the stove to check, but the food was all good. Nothing was burnt, it
Fire, fire! Mrs. Andrews said, Turn off that stove now!
Everyone looked at where the small fire was starting on the stove. You could see the
teacher grabbing a fire extinguisher under her desk and running to the two students, looking
worried and scared. Mrs. Andrews running across the class was the fastest I saw her move from
All clear! The fire is out. She revealingly said, Class, continue on until the last five
The sound of the teachers phone was loud enough for the whole class to hear. That
sound was to tell us that we should start preparing our meal on the plate and clean up our station.
Of course, I was preparing the meal to look the best it could actually look while Abbey Yes I
admit it, Im saying the nickname in my head. Its shorter, and flows right out of my mouth.
Anyways, she was cleaning all the pots, pans, utensils, and other materials we used.
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That is the end of our lecture and for notes. The bell is about to ring, pack your stuff,
Time for lunch, my favorite time of the day. Piling all my papers and pens together,
stuffing them in my backpack quickly. The bell rang declaring lunch time. The students in my
Followed by a sound of metal, and the feeling of metal against my body. I was rammed
against a locker. Ouch, that hurt and will leave a bruise tomorrow.
Watch where youre going kid, said a guy who looks like a 12th grader, also the one
Ugh, why is everyone just running into us, said one of the girls with him questioning
The group of seniors walked away nonchalantly heading towards the cafeteria which was
in the middle of the school campus. A voice piped up in the process of trying to stand back up.
No, I just like sitting on the floor, I said trying be sarcastic as possible.
She gives me her hand, assisting with me off the floor. Wiping myself off with all the
dust and debris from the floor flying off. The dirt going back to the floor where it belonged
Somehow, Abigail and myself are walking together to the cafeteria. I didnt notice us
walking side by side. I just daydream a lot, losing my train of thought all the time throughout the
day.
Hows your day so far? excluding the part where I found you.
Well, tiring and stressed, just like a usual school day to be honest.
Reletable.
A couple minutes has passed and we reached our destination, the cafeteria food line. The
line is so long, if only that guy didnt push me, I wouldve been here when it was half this size.
Keeeggaaannn! Get over here now, said one of my friends in a small group at a table
near me.
I walked away as fast as I could before I could hear her response. That was the most
Aw, look at Keegan with his tomato face. All blushy blushy, said Kimberly, my best
Nothing, nothing, They all stared at me like I was crazy, Really! Its nothing. Change
Gladly, they my group of friends which consisted of Kimberly and James. My two best
friends, making Kim the closest friend compared to James. Im worrying Kim will find out about
my little crush on Abbey. Shell figure it out in no time, I just need time to last a little longer. But
time is never favorable to me, so I can only hope. Hope, hope, and hope.
I chuckled, Oh, is that annoying sound James voice again? Oh wait, its just the bell
this time.
James glared at me with his face full of sass and attitude ready to burst. All of us laughed
to ourselves and started to stand up. More than halfway to the end of school. Cant wait.