Revision Plan

Essay number 2

Jami Michie

Professor Ramsby-Harris

The peer reviews of my essay stated a few good points. Points which I will use to
revise and polish my essay.

Point #1.

Fine tune the thesis. Update it to reflect the issue of racism more clearly.

Point #2

Break up large blocks of text to make the points of each paragraph easier to
follow.

Point #3

Cite the outside sources in a more clear MLA format.

Point #4

Correct the grammatical and spellong errors that are throughout the paper.

Point #5

Revise thesis again to reflect a few things that I have learned through the
course.