Callum Vatcher, Tom Checksfield, Abbie Herrett, Lewis Martin

LO5 Feedback. 10/2/17

Current Grade for LO5: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
There is no may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
doubt this improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
advert is work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
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on a
Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Distinction Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
grade.
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
However,
this cannot be given as, you need to explain how you have used the client
feedback to make changed to the advertisement to meet this criteria.
To improve to a Distinction grade you will need to do this and of course, tighten
up the edit in places. There are a few shots that need to be shortened slightly
and the ending needs fixing.
As discussed, it might be worth re-shooting some more party scenes and having
the cuts a bit quicker. Also, as a final touch, make sure that the edit is cut to the
beat.

The resubmission deadline is: 31/03/2017