Studio Five Revision

When revising my essay, adding more supporting details to my introduction

went well. The only thing I found difficult or confusing was adding more
personal descriptions of myself because I felt like it wasnt necessary. I can
now say that when writing an essay I will focus more on content rather than
sticking to a constructed way of writing an essay. Peer feedback helped my
writing by giving me a point of view that was on the same level as mine, but
with different opinions to revise from.