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Peer Review Research Paper Check st What Others Sey Wf Do you sat wth what ters? @ Do you summarize or paraphrase what they've sa ‘Adequately?) of doyouuteathers? Yor& MCN Have you documented all summaries and quotations? (In-ext and Reference page) 1B Do,you remind readers of what others say at vious points ‘throughout your text? (See pp. 27-28) What You Say © Do you agree, disagree, or both with those you're responding to? © Ityoudisagree, do you give reasons why you disagree? 1D you agree, what more have you added tothe conversation? J NTA 10 Hfyou both agree and disagree, do you do so without confusing | fy readers or seeming evsive? (Accurately? A OrOP es, 2 [D__ Have you stated your positon andthe one i responds to as a ‘connected unt? 1D. Do,you give reasons and evidence to support you I say"? 10 Will readers be able to distinguish what you sy rom what others say? (6 Chapter 5) Naysayers 1D Have you acknowledged ike objections to your argument? 1D. Ifso, have you represented these views fairly —and responded to them persuasively? (See Chapter 6) Metacommentary 1D. Do you explain what you mean ~ or don't mean ~ with phrases like “in other words” or “don’t get me wrong”? (Chapter 10) J Do you have a ttle? 1 fs, does it tell readers what your main point or issue is, and oes it do so in lively manner? 1 Should you adda subtitle to elaborate on the title? Tie M Together Can readers follow your argument from one sentence and paragraph fo the next and see how each successive point supports your overall argument? 2 Do you use transitions, words like “however” and “therefore”? (Comectiy? Accurately?) (0. Check your use of pointing words. Do you use common pointers Tike “this” and “that,” which help lead readers from one sentence to the next? © so, is italways clear what “this” and “that” refer to? (ee pp. mz) (2. 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