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Shayla Staggers
Dr.Wynne
Written Communications
9 February 2017
Slavery was never abolished it was simply reinvented. Mass incarceration is defined as
the substantial increase in the prison population. It has become an effect of the American Justice
System, inforced by our founding fathers who were not activist for racial equality. While the 13th
Amendment was ratified to put an end to slavery it simply opened the doors to a redefined
movement now known as mass incarceration. The documentary 13th directed by Ava
DuVernay, and the book The new Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the age of Colorblindness
written by Michelle Alexander both serve to depict this systematic oppression of the African
American community. The difference between these two genres is not the content of the message
but the medium in which the message is being relayed to the audience.
Writing attracts a specific audience and operates based on the extent of the details
provided by the author. With books being so lengthy, they have the advantage of being able to
provide as much detail needed for the author to get their point across and fully analyze the topic.
With books comes opinions, facts, personal experiences, etc. This book uses many persuasive
techniques to appeal to those who care about racial justice, but are not yet awaken to this new
and reformed version of oppression. The author feels the need to reinforce the word color-
blind to emphasize that The drug war is the new Jim Crow and bring attention to those who
are not mindful of the society we live in. The author also includes specialized vocabulary such as
lockdown to compare the world we live in now to the world we once identified with.
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In addition, the book uses rhetoric such as ethos, pathos, and logos, to deliver a more
effective message to the reader. Credibility of the source is established through facts provided by
the author and the history of our country. Alexander is a highly acclaimed civil rights lawyer as
well as a civil rights activist graduating from Stanford Law School and Vanderbilt University.
With this status as well as Alexander being African American she can provide a source of pathos
for the writer because she is also a victim of this oppression. In attempts to evoke passion from
the audience; she provides personal experiences as well as encounters of others to make the text
come alive and relate to real life situations. Facts are provided within the text to support evidence
Structure and delivery are essential in grabbing the attention of the audience. Information
is organized to convey the authors message. In this genre the author organizes the information
provided chronologically so that the reader can easily follow along. She starts off by giving a
brief description of slavery showing the transition into The Jim Crow era and how that became
the era of mass incarceration. With written genres you are more open to interpretation due to
the lack of visuals. In this genre there are limitations in the audience because books do not appeal
to most. Some may not enjoy reading and find visuals easier to understand. This genre explores
the topic and explains it to the reader in a cause and effect structure.
On the contrary, visual genres have a broader audience and the ability to appeal to most.
Information is processed faster and more efficiently when displayed visually versus textually.
This visual genre in the form of a documentary targets African Americans who have prior
knowledge of mass incarceration, but are unsure why things operate the way they do and how we
can rise above this oppression as a people. The audience will spend less time with this genre
however the message will be just as effective as any other. This documentary was created to
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inform the audience of the injustices in our country. In a formal delivery, the director reiterates
legal terminology such as Bill of Rights and 13th Amendment (DuVernay) to stress the role
of laws implemented to structure our society. Visuals provided within this genre consist of
pictures from the Civil Rights Movement , inmates, and lots of black and white symbolizing
racial contrast.
As well as the written genre, this genre provides all elements of rhetoric: ethos, logos,
and pathos to appeal to those who are watching. DuVernay displays ethos being a well known
female African American director graduating from UCLA with a double major in English and
African American studies. Credibility of the documentary was established through her education
and background, personal opinion, celebrity commentary, as well as factual information. Logos
serves as a huge addition to this documentary. In the documentary the first line stated by
President Barack Obama says, The United States is home to 5% of the worlds population, but
25% of the worlds prisoners (DuVernay). This shocking statistic serves to immediately grab the
viewers attention making them want to continue watching. Lastly, in the documentary pathos
serves to evoke anger and awareness from the audience . Factual evidence provided by primary
sources and history supports claims by giving explanation and clearance of the topic. The
director inputs anecdotes of Emmett Till, Dr. Martin Luther King, and Rosa Parks to explore
obstacles we once had to live with. Showing the picture of Emmett Tills open casket as well as
lynching which was once legal in America, helped to get a reaction of sympathy and anger from
the audience. These emotional appeals will then serve to persuade viewers to become activist.
This documentary is structured as a story with the addition of outside sources. It begins
with discussing slavery, then how the 13th Amendment transformed this idea into criminals
becoming the new slaves. The usage of chronological statistics helps the viewer understand the
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sequence of events. This film is not a movie, and is based on facts. It is able to express what it
needs to with no limitations. These two genres have the same message; mass incarceration is the
new form of slavery. However visual structure allows the audience to not only retain the
information, but emotionally connect to what is being portrayed and potentially make a change.
Of the two genres the 13th directed by Ava DuVernay and The New Jim Crow
written by Michelle Alexander , the 13th is a more effective genre to impact the audience and
deliver the message. With a visual genre the audience can hear the message, see and identify
with the topic using pictures, music, and personal opinions. While the book, The New Jim
Crow delivered the same message, Alexander took a more structured and formal approach. This
formality and inability to be relatable narrows down the audience that the 13th would attract.
Sometimes the method of communication holds more value than the message itself.
Works Cited
Alexander, Michelle. New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness. N.p.: New,
2010. Print.
13th. Dir. Ava DuVernay. Perf. Angela Davis Jelani Cobb. 13th. Howard Barish, 7 Oct. 2016. Web.
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