Comments/Questions by D.

Jizi

I can tell you have some specific goals for your future. These will help you as you move

forward, making the tough times worth it all. I like how you mention meaning. Meaning is an

integral part to a life of flourishing. You dont need the first paragraph. Take out the stress. You

dont want to envision that part. Just write about how it all turns out in the end, the best possible

scenario. Comma use and sentence structure Incorporate your value for adventure in the part

where you write about you and your husband traveling and exploring.