Spencer Finkel

ENC20135

Professor Doran

30 April 2017

Revision Explanations

For Wix, I revised project two by adding an additional paragraph.

The part will be inserted after the seventh paragraph. The section explains

the program cuts the Trump administration is planning on making to

shrink the federal debt. This paragraph adds one scholarly source and

another news article. My paper is about why we cannot reduce

environmental policy to fuel the economy and this paragraph explains

how the government is wrongly trying to do it. The purpose of this

paragraph is to make my argument clearer and more concrete.

For the regrade of my bibliography, I added the scholarly sources I

was missing and rewrote the explanations to the sources I already had. My

original document lacked in its MLA formatting and included sources that

were never used in my paper. In this revision, I fixed all the citations to

correctly reflect the MLA 8 format. In my new bibliography, you will find

ten sources, seven scholarly articles, and three web articles, all properly

cited.