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Donna Rawlins
Plan for the Teaching of an ORACY and WRITING Strategy for Year 5 using a
fictional text
RATIONALE
These five literacy lessons are based on ideas This chapter was chosen as it
allows students to understand and
presented in My Place, Chapter 1788 by Nadia
show respect towards Indigenous
Wheatley and Donna Rawlins which is about Australians (2.4). Additionally, it
allows students insight into
Aboriginal cultures. Indigenous Australians history,
culture and language.
Information reports will be the focus text type for these 5 consecutive lessons.
Information reports are used to organise and present factual information (Wing Jan,
2015). Over the five sessions, students will achieve the ability to build topic knowledge,
explore different points of view, identify the
difference between fact and opinion and The information and lessons have been
organised into an effective learning and
then create a draft that will be edited, teaching sequence (2.2), as seen below.
reviewed, revised and published.
This text type was chosen to explore My Place as the Victorian Curriculum has a strand
for level 5 that involves identifying the text structures and language features used in
information reports (VCELY320) (Victorian Curriculum and Assessment Authority, 2016).
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LESSON PLANNING
LESSON 1
Literacy Unit learning intentions
In this unit we are learning to write an information report
Learning behaviours
I need to research aboriginal customs
I need to answer the questions on the board
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definitions. South Melbourne, Vic.: well if I can
Finish by completing the learnt Oxford University Press place them
section of the KWL chart. in a T-chart
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LESSON 2
Literacy Unit learning intentions
In this unit we are learning to write an information report
Learning behaviours
I need to know the purpose of an information report
I need to know what is included in an information report
I need to explore and be able to identify the different types of point of view [POV]
Learning Structure Resources
Intentions
DIFFERENTIATION STRATEGY:
Prompting: EALD students will have a small
focus group on POV. The teacher and
students in this group will partake in shared
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and interactive writing.
Extending: students can write a small
paragraph in each POV.
OUTCOMES REQUIRED:
Oracy is used when discussing language
features, discussing ideas about POV in focus
group and in roving conferences.
INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGY/IES CHOSEN PROMPTING QUESTIONS
Shared and interactive writing for guided practice, Factual questions
independent writing for independent application, focus Appendix 2.4
group and roving conferences to support learning.
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LESSON 3
Literacy Unit learning intentions
In this unit we are learning to write an information report
Learning behaviours
I need to identify the difference between facts and opinion
I need to understand the difference between facts and opinion
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LESSON 4
Literacy Unit learning intentions
In this unit we are learning to write an information report
Learning behaviours.
I need to explain what is involved in an information report
I need to contribute to the construction of joint text
I need to contribute to the template
I need to write a draft information report
DIFFERENTIATION STRATEGY:
Prompting: EALD students will co-construct
the information report with teacher. The
ideas need to come from the students.
OUTCOMES REQUIRED:
Oracy is utilised when co-constructing
template and partaking in roving
conferences.
INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGY/IES CHOSEN PROMPTING QUESTIONS
Modelled reading to revise content to students, interactive Factual questions
writing to create an appropriate template and roving Appendix 4.2
conferences to support students learning.
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LESSON 5
Literacy Unit learning intentions
In this unit we are learning to write an information report
Learning behaviours
I need to write an information report about aboriginal culture
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Extending: Swap and review a peers work.
Give warm and cool feedback. Student can
go on to review and revise their work.
OUTCOMES REQUIRED:
Oracy when giving feedback to peers and
responding in roving conferences
INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGY/IES CHOSEN: PROMPTING QUESTIONS
Independent writing when completing information reports Evaluative questions
for independent application and roving conferences to Appendix 5.1
support students learning
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JUSTIFICATION
Two language features that are predominantly This section demonstrates that I
explored in the lesson plans are sentences have understood the knowledge and
concepts that I will be teaching the
containing one or more facts and writing in third students which connects to Standard
person (Wing-Jan, 2015). Sentences containing 2.1 (content and teaching strategies
of the teaching area). Additionally, it
one or more facts was selected as students will demonstrates that I have a
justification as to why certain
benefit from learning the differences between
content has been chosen.
fact and opinion which will assist them in only
writing about factual information that is gained
from several sources in their information reports (Wing Jan, 2015). Writing in third person
was selected so that students could explore the different perspectives and understand
what types of pronouns are appropriate for each (Wing-Jan, 2015). These two language
features were selected as they are dominant features in an information report.
There are many things that affect students learning some of them being their levels of
readiness, emotional and cognitive capabilities, individual learning styles and the
teachers personality (Hernandez, 1973). Instructional strategies are particular for each
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classroom so the teacher must be able to adjust to the dynamics of the classroom in
order to meet the needs of students and support them in achieving the set tasks
(Hernandez, 1973). Hernandez (1973) states that effective teaching appears to use a
variety of instructional strategies personalised to the objectives of the lesson and the
students needs at the time of the teaching.
Each lesson plan contains roving conferences, which is defined as teachers walking
around the classroom and stopping regularly to discuss a students writing (Rickards &
Hawes, 2004). It involves students describing their work and teachers supporting
students to make connections and ask questions to clarify points to deepen the reader's
understanding (Rickards & Hawes, 2004). Roving conferences allow teachers to support
writing tasks by giving students specific direction (Raban & Essex, 2003). They can also
be used for assessment as the teacher takes notes to summarise interaction with
students (Rickards & Hawes, 2004).
Each lesson contains different language features relevant to the genre and various
instruction strategies. These support students in developing their oral and written
language. Intertwined through every lesson is opportunities for students to practice their
oracy skills e.g. in group discussions, warm and cold feedback to peers, roving
conference with the teacher, new subject specific terms and using oral language to
justify their choices. They are also provided with multiple written language opportunities
as in each class they produce at least one work sample from the information they have
learnt.
The instructional strategies begin by the teacher showing the students how to read the
allocated section of My Place (Wheatley & Rawlins, 1992) and how to take information
from it. Together they progress to shared experiences which is we do and by the
completion of the unit of work students partake in independent writing to publish their
information reports which is you do. This series of instructional strategies encourages
the gradual release of responsibility model and is intertwined within the five sequential
lessons. It has been researched and established as an effective approach for improving
literacy achievement (Fisher & Frey, 2007), as well as improving literacy outcomes for
English language learners (Kong & Pearson, 2003).The gradual release of responsibility
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model can be seen as a type of scaffolding (Wood, Bruner & Ross, 1976). It involves
teachers modelling to their students and students having opportunities for guided
practice and then students independently Literacy strategies have been
practicing their new learning (Maynes, Julien- incorporated into each lesson
(Standard 2.5).
Schultz & Dunn, 2010). For this model to be
effective teachers need to engage students in
purposeful instruction to meet the needs of
individuals which ensure that students are
supported in their acquisition of the skills and strategies necessary for success (Fisher,
2008).
The teaching and learning cycle involves building topic knowledge, building text
knowledge, guided activities to develop vocabulary and text knowledge, joint
construction of the text, independent construction of text and reflecting language
choices (Smith-Pill, 2016). The educational process is also influenced by instruction,
assessment, and curriculum (Jones, 2008). Assessment is essential in the teaching and
learning cycle as it assists teachers to analyse evidence of student learning and assists
in making judgment about the effectiveness of the teaching (Wing Jan, 2015).
The cycle is closely linked in with the five consecutive lesson plans as it was discovered
when teachers incorporate the teaching and learning cycle in their daily planning and
instructional delivery, students learning was enhanced (Jinkins, 2011). Jinkins (2011)
states that being familiar with the teaching and learning cycle and applying it daily,
whilst reflecting on the students outcomes allows teachers to develop an awareness of
links between their instructional decisions and student learning. Additionally, it permits
teachers to articulate their understanding and modify their practice accordingly (Jinkins,
2011).
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The lesson plans are focused on a grade 5 class
The Victorian Curriculum was taken
which contains multiple EALD students. Students in into consideration when planning
this level are developing socially, intellectually, these lessons (2.3)
Cole (2008) depicts that English as an additional language or dialect (EALD) students are
often not intellectually challenged as teachers often restrict their activities to the lowest
level, however, there is evidence to suggest that like other students, EAL students
benefit from high challenge programs (Hammond, 2012).
A difficult task for teachers is providing support for EALD students and other students to
ensure everyone has access to high challenge programs (Hammond, 2012). This is why
in each lesson plan there is a section for prompting students who may be EALD as well
as an extending prompt for students who may finish the whole class task early. By doing
this the teacher will be able to accommodate for both these types of learning.
Students need to have the opportunity to build on their knowledge of every day and
literate spoken language to develop understandings of written genres and they need
support to develop insights into the structures and grammatical patterns of these genres
(Hammond, 2012). Pressure is on teachers to cover the curriculum which means it is
difficult to have a program that allows time for students to engage at a deep level with
the curriculum knowledge (Hammond, 2012).
The literary features of this text type intertwined with the instructional strategies enable
students to best enhance their oracy skills.
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APPENDICES:
Appendix 1.1
On tablets or computers students individually explore aboriginal customs discussed in
My Place and write notes in their books. Discuss the importance of using a variety of
resources when researching a topic. They are able to build topic knowledge using videos
and various texts, they are able to find images to contribute to their information reports.
Assist the students in developing effective note-taking skills by demonstrating how to
read for specific information. Organise the information in their books by using a T-chart
with the question and then the answer.
Focus questions/prompting questions to promote students thinking (write these on the
board):
Why were aborigines always moving around?
Why did they have so many homes?
What tools might they have used?
What food did they commonly eat?
What is Fire-stick farming?
Appendix 1.2
Why were aborigines always moving around?
Why did they have so many homes?
What tools might they have used?
What food did they commonly eat?
What is Fire-stick farming?
Appendix 2.1
As a group orally discuss the language features and structure of and information report.
Discuss the layout, sequence and organisation of the text.
These include:
Definitions of uncommon or subject-specific terms
Third person
Factual information
Timeless present tense
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General nouns
Headings
Opening statement
Related information grouped in paragraphs
Visual text
Descriptive language
Appendix 2.2
On a smart board analyse Antarctica article below with students to identify features.
Focus on the POV that information reports are written in.
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(Board of Studies Teaching & Educational Standards NSW, 2007)
Appendix 2.3
Focus on the POV that information reports are written in. Look at my place, 1788 and get
the students to discuss what POV it is written in.
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Discuss what verb tenses might be used when writing in different POV. Ask students to
individually write three sentences, one for each POV (first, second and third person).
Once they have done this focus on the third person perspective in appendix 2.2.
Appendix 2.4
What POV is my place written in?
What POV is an information report written in?
What types of verbs are used in information reports?
What types of tense is used in information reports?
Appendix 3.1
Open up to 1788 in my place and read the first page. On the board draw up a T-chart
that has the headings fact and opinion.
As a class students are to deconstruction what elements on that page are fact and
opinion. Whilst doing this the students must be able to justify to their peers why they
think it belongs under that heading. Peers need to agree or disagree and justify
themselves.
Appendix 3.2
As a class refer again to appendix 2.2, read it out line by line and ask the students to put
up their hands when they think a fact is mentioned. Emphasise that there are no types
of opinions mentioned in the information report and that this is a common language
feature.
Appendix 3.3
Students are to do independent writing where their information revolves around facts (5
sentences); they are able to use IPads or laptops to gain information. Once completed
students get into pairs and swap work. Students need to analyse their peer's work,
investigate if they have only written about facts and provide feedback.
Appendix 3.4
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(Fact versus Opinion, 2012)
Appendix 3.5
What is a fact?
What is an opinion?
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What is the difference between the two?
Appendix 4.1
Here is an example of the template
1. Introduce topic classification of the thing about which the report is written
2. Headings throughout, e.g. title, sub-headings
3. Main body, descriptions
a. Topic sentences(introductory sentences for each paragraph)
b. Paragraph content to elaborate content in topic sentence
4. Concluding information
Appendix 4.2
How can we start out information report?
What language features must our reports include?
Appendix 5.1
Have you included all the language features we have explored?
Have you included headings?
Have you revised your work to make sure you only have facts?
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