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Jasmine Edmondson

Ms.Netherton

College Writing

25 September 2017

Conclusion
I believe my biggest strength as a writer is coming up with a good thesis statement for my

essay .I feel this my biggest strength because as a writer I really got better with type of tool

.When I first start writing this was really hard for me coming up with but I stuck too and made a

lot of progress down the road .

My favorite essay I wrote was about the The necklace which was apart of my final grade.

This is my favorite essay because I feel I gave a strong solid thesis statement and I gave a lot of

vivid details to back up my claims so that the reader could actually understand my purpose for

writing the essay .I took my time and really focus on this essay .

My biggest weakness as I began college writing was coming up a thesis statement

because I really didnt understand the purpose of a thesis statement, I mean I knew what a thesis

was but I really didnt think it was very important at first . I had overcome this weakness by

asking questions about the importance of a thesis statement and I start practicing more and more

with thesis statements and I honestly feel I got better.

I think whats been the hardest about this final portfolio is correcting my old essays and

making them appealing to my audience to read but for the most part I think I did good hopefully .

The most important lesson I learn in college writing is that you will always get better as a

writing. This is the most important lesson because this really made me open my eyes that I will

never fail as a writer even I feel my writing isnt as good as it suppose to be its still good .
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What I think I need to improve on is taking risks as a writer by knowing its okay to mess

up and not do some right but its even better to ask for help when needed. I can do this in the

future by continuing to write what I feel .

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CONCLUSION
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