Lopez Jesus

Professor Batty

English 101

30 May 2017

Reflection

In the Literary Essay we had to choose a character in Stillwater Saint by Alex Espinoza that

represents the most like a hero and I chose Perla . I got a 31/50 in this essay for many reason like

I needed to make a better quote sandwiches by setting up and explaining my quotes more, also

need to work on the organization of my body paragraphs because my body paragraph talked

about the same and it was very repetitive so something that might help is to make the body

paragraph tie back to my thesis. I also have a lot grammar mistake that I need to fix. The way I

fixed my essay is making two of my body paragraph into one making a more powerful and less

repetitive paragraph. I also added another paragraph to also make it less repetitive by adding a

counter argument paragraph to further explain my reason. In hope to make my essay better I

made friends reread my essay to find mistake I can't find myself and I also read it a lot since I

heard it does help reading it out loud also.