Elizabeth Ruiz

Professor Batty

May 29, 2017

Literary Analysis Reflection

In order to achieve a better grade for my revised Literary Analysis essay I edited and

added a few things that I did not have in the original graded essay. The first things I added were

quotes to support my ideas and commentary. My original essay did not have any quotes which

significantly lowered my grade. The second page I added was for the Works cited, something I

was also missing in the original that affected my grade. The last change I made was creating a

stronger thesis statement. My original thesis was not straight to the point and it was all over the

place. In my revision I attempted to make it more concise and exactly to the point.