Assignment score Teacher comments Improved strategies

Juvenile Justice 26/33 NA Provide more

seminar evidence for my
arguments.

Bring up more ideas

or different ideas that
what is being said to
progress the
discussion.

Play the devils

advocate

Juvenile Justice 42/50 Thesis should be at Put the thesis at the

Essay end of Paragraph end obviously.

Run on Add more evidence.

Explain more Expand on my ideas

more
Expand the analysis

Strong Paragraph

Language, Gender, 45/50 Good intro Work on clearly

and Culture Writing stating my sources.
Assignment Sources?
Clear ideas
Run on

1984 Essay 38/50 none Take more time

Plan out using

outlines

Use high vocab to

sound smarter

1984 Socratic 22/25 Good Prep more

Seminar
Prep more Create more
questions

Take more notes