Kenia Flores

Professor Batty

English 101

31 May 2017

Reflection

I put so much effort on my observation for this essay because I normally do have supportive

points that help with my arguments and with my thesis. Getting my essay reviewed by professor

I had to clean up a little with my thesis but it was quite interesting for readers. Revising this

essay I had to try to make my essay more organized as what a reader expects to read as it's said

in the introduction. I needed to work on my quotes and use a quote structure for it can

successfully make a nice and clear explanation with having the quote being introduced why it's

added to the essay and to my argument. I also fixed on my grammar mistakes such as "The

Olvera Street" to "Olvera Street." There was a couple grammar mistakes that I had to fix that it

could've been distracting for the reader.

I fixed my essay with fixing my thesis and tried to make it more clear for the reader to

understand what's going on and what's the argument that the reader should be able to know.

Working on my organizing my arguments and points as it should follow my introduction to the

reader. There was a lot of grammar mistakes that I had to fix and removed such as the name of

the district "The Olvera Street" to "Olvera Street" because it's how it's originally called. I had to

complete some couple sentences according to make sense for the reader to understand and it was

distracting the reader from the essay.