B.A.

HONS IN CREATIVE MEDIA PRODUCTION

STORYTELLING AND NARRATIVE

EVALUATION

DANICA-LUANA ELLUL
CLASS A
JOHN

The story is about a young man who hides

his true self from his father.
The father wanted his son to be a tough
guy.
Anna was Johns best friend.
EVERYDAY LIFE

John is all grown up.

He is preparing for a date.
He on facebook and starts getting cold feet.
He hasnt told his father that he is gay.
Has the fear of being caught.
Anna encourages him.
John goes on date.
NARRATIVE

The way the editing is done, shows

preparation for an event.
There is a change in the characters
expression.
The sound effects makes the scene more
real.
The dialogue specifies the fear John has.
EFFECTIVENESS OF NARRATION

The narration was understandable, but could have

been better.
There is hesitation from John to go to the date.
The music gives the tone to the scene.
The sound shows that he is communication with
Anna through the phone.
FUTURE IMPROVEMENTS

Better shots
Check the focus
Take my time to film the scene
Have working equipment
More cutaways
Better sounds and music
Thank you