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Rough Draft Accomplishment
Rough Draft Accomplishment
Main, Daniel
English 12th
Date: 5-10-17
Rough draft accomplishment
The Goal
An accomplishment I had was when I was young; playing the sport I loved which was
hockey. I was playing for the Watertown Rapids and I played forward. During the regular season
of hockey I scored 20 goals and we made it to the playoffs which took place in Ottawa, Canada.
During the playoffs which were single elimination and three games I scored five goals and we
made it to the championship game against a rival, the Cobras. The last time we played the
Cobras was in the regular season in which we lost 6-2 so we wanted revenge in the most
The game was about to start and I was taking the faceoff for the championship game
which was also my last hockey game of my hockey career. While at the faceoff the puck dropped
and we lost the faceoff and the Cobras had the puck, during the first the puck had gone back and
forth on both sides of the ice, during the first our goalie had an amazing glove save by the
Cobras best player. At the end of the first period the score was 0-0 and there was still two more
periods left. In the second period both of the teams scored and at the end of the second period it
was 1-1. The third period started and it was tied 1-1 during the third period with only three
minutes in the game and I had the puck with a two on one.
Across the ice from me were my teammate and in front another player from the Cobras.
While having the puck I passed it to my teammate and my teammate passed it back to me and I
shot the puck and scored the game-winning goal in which we won 2-1 in the championship game
against our rival the Cobras. After the game we shook hands with the Cobras and then was
awarded the championship trophy. The whole team was excited has we were handed our trophy
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