Sophia Gonzalez

9th Grade Humanities

Ms. Britt Shirk

June 11, 2017

3 Vignettes Reflection

We wrote 3 vignettes that were about a characteristics of u. I first wrote about my house,

my hair, and my name. I wrote my house is an average size house and how I would like to have a

dream house. I then wrote about about my hair and how I dont like it and my name. We

reflected on the things that are aspects of our life. I wrote something very simple in all of the

vignettes.

I wrote that my house is a regular size house and it looks like an average home, but then

my teacher said that I should say how it actually looks because average is not the same to

everyone. I feel like I need to be more specific and say how it actually looks like and use more

figurative language.

I also wrote about my hair and I said how it physically looks but I should had said more

things like its like a child that doesnt obey I feel like I need to work more on figurative

language too. On my last vignette I need to work more on ending my vignette and also ending

my sentences with something strong because my last sentence on a vignette it sounds like not a

ending sentence.