LO1

FEEDBACK

Jonathan Joensen LO1 Feedback. 22/5/2017

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 1 is a Merit Grade,
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
learning outcome 2 is a Pass. Even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections
ensure these are made.
or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words Re-Submission.

LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

The start of some good work. Add audience to the ideas document, finish the moodboard
(add the fonts you want to use, check the handout for what you need to add) and add the
production schedule (remove chill oooot). Please see the handouts or me for guidance.

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2: Fail
Cat attack? Not sure about this one! Apart from that, good risk assessment. You just need to add
the Copyright considerations and the Legal / Ethical parts to this Learning outcome and this will be
finished.

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 16th