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(Fred Fabre)

Final Draft 8 Demo

Final Draft 8 Demo

Fred Fabre
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1 INT. EMILIAS STUDIO/BEDROOM 1

Looking like a painting in motion: Mid shot of the Virgin

Mary (Emilia) reaching ecstatic beauty. As she touches
herself she gets period blood on her fingers. She screams.

2 ANIMATION SEQUENCE 2

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Virgin Mary screaming as she looks at the blood on her hand
as the picture turns into a beautiful charcoal drawing
animation.

3 INT. EMILIAS STUDIO/BEDROOM NIGHT 3

Emilia wakes up. She stares at the ceiling for a beat. She
picks up her phone, It is 2:48, and googles BRAIN TUMOUR

Title sequence with graphics (Undoing various stage of photo

retouch)

Pulling out from Neil Computer screen

4 INT. VINTAGE CAFE - DAY 4

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Neil is observing discreetly Emilia who is working as a
waitress.

Emilia brings a cappuccino to Neil.

NEIL
Great! Thanks. I like your hair (a
beat) .Your boyfriend must like it.

EMILA
I dont do boyfriends

CUT TO:

5 FAST FORWARD IN TIME 5

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Emilia and Neil sitting on the sofa

EMILIA
22 and you?

NEIL
39

Emilia touching Neils face

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EMILIA
I cant believe you are 39, did you
have plastic surgery or something

CUT TO:

6 BACK TO PRESENT TIME 6

Emilia and Neil carrying on the conversation in the cafe

EMILIA
Dont you think Im too young for

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you?

NEIL
Older women already have families,
if I want a family one day I need
to date younger women. Are you a
student?

EMILIA
Just finishing Art School

NEIL
I do motion design, freelancing,
quite busy. I dont have much time
for my own stuff.

EMILIA
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I am time poor, and money poor

NEIL
We live in time but we dont know
time, Aristotle said the fish
doesnt know water unless you are
taking him out the water. Then he
knows water.

EMILIA
The only reason for time is so that
everything doesn't happen at once

7 INT. EMILAS HOUSE SHARE - KITCHEN 7

Emilia is making herself a cup of tea. Canelle comes in.

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Look, you are my lodger and I
shouldnt interfere but... You need
to eat something, I never see you
eating except salad leaves. Are you
anorexic or something?

EMILIA
No I am not! Hypochondriac yes,
anorexic no. I am making green tea,
do you want some?
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CANELLE
Ill make myself a coffee

Canelle making the coffee

CANELLE (CONTD)
Are you OK? You look like you could
do with some serious fun! You are
not depressed or something?

CUT TO:

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INT. EMILAS HOUSE SHARE/BATHROOM

Canelle is forcing her fingers in Emilias throat to make her

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vomit.

CANELLE
Come on girl. Spit it all....
Please...

Some pills roll on the bathroom floor as Emilia vomit.

9 INT. EMILIAS BEDROOM/STUDIO 9

Emilia and Neil looking at Emilas work. A painting of the

Virgin Mary with period blood on her fingers.

NEIL
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WOW! You work is very (a beat)
iconoclastic.

EMILIA
Mary was a sexual being too.

NEIL
Orgasm and religious ecstasy, both
have cosmic connections.

EMILIA
Been a virgin didnt stop her to
have orgasm and period. She is
unreachable, none of us can do
conceive without having sex!
Therefore we all are potential
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witches or hores, beings not to be
trusted and impure. And anything
related to women sexuality is
sinful and inacceptable.

NEIL
I am a supporter of womens rights
and social justice
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10 INT. EMILIAS BEDROOM/STUDIO 10

Emilia and Neil are in bed. Neil is humping Emilia like a

dog. Emilia grabs the scum manifesto by her bedside and
whack Neil on the face.

EMILIA
Get back in line !

(Fast speed up montage) She climbs on the top of him and rub
herself against him, sit on his face etc... until she reaches
orgasm. Neil Struggle a bit to keep up to start with.

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They end up coming together and Emilia cuddles him. The scene
by the end does reflects love an tenderness.

Emilia reading an excerpt of the Scum Manifesto which is

overlaid over the scene

EMILIA (V.O.)
Although completely physical, the
male is unfit even for stud
service. Even assuming mechanical
proficiency, which few men have, he
is, first of all, incapable of
zestfully, lustfully, tearing off a
piece, but instead is eaten up with
guilt, shame, fear and insecurity,
feelings rooted in male nature,
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which the most enlightened training
can only minimize; second, the
physical feeling he attains is next
to nothing; and third, he is not
empathizing with his partner, but
is obsessed with how he's doing,
turning in an A performance, doing
a good plumbing job. To call a man
an animal is to flatter him; he's a
machine, a walking dildo. It's
often said that men use women. Use
them for what? Surely not pleasure.

Emilia reading out-loud with Neils head on her shoulder.

NEIL
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Irreverent, funny, outrageous, and
extreme. Shocking, a rage well
articulated though.

FADE OUT.

11 INT. EMILIAS BEDROOM/STUDIO 11

Emilia reads, while Neil is in deep sleep on his tummy.

12 INT. EMILIAS HOUSE SHARE/KITCHEN 12

Canelle and Emilia drinking tea/coffee

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CANELLE
Maybe older men charge in like a
rhino but when they are done they
sleep like a rhino.

EMILIA
I dont want to go out with boys my
age, their vision of sex is
completely distorted. For them a
woman is just a hole and they just
want to go from one hole to an
other hole.... When a simple touch

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can go a very long way, they have
no idea. Men just want to fuck,
when I want to make love to life.

13 INT. NEILS WAREHOUSE 13

Emilia is lying on the side, Neil is behind her trying to

have sex.

EMILIA
Stop it, I dont want.

NEIL
You dont fancy me anymore

EMILIA
It is not that. Ill tell you when
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I feel like it.

NEIL
Ok, so when? If I become a
vegetarian will we have more sex
then?

14 INT. NEILS WAREHOUSE - NIGHT 14

Neil behind his computer working on a project, while Emilia

is lying awake in bed in the other room.

NEIL
I love you darling

No reactions from Emilia

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Now Neil is looking at porn.

NEIL (CONTD)
We should move out of London... you
could have a bigger studio. What do
you think darling? Moving out
London.

EMILIA
About my friends?
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NEIL
What friends, youve got me now.

Emilia lying drifting to sleep (Emilia turns into a video art

work just about to wake up) and all you can hear if bits of
Neil rambling in the room next door.

NEIL (CONTD)
A cat.. Maybe some chickens...
nature... married ... Children...
Growing old... ahaha... darling?

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INT. EMILIAS HOUSE SHARE/KITCHEN

Canelle chopping carrots, aubergines and courgettes with

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great energy.

CANELLE
Dont let any man walking on you
like that. Look who you are ! You
are young, educated and beautiful,
you have to leave him. He doesnt
deserve you, he is controlling you.

CANELLE (CONTD)
Youll find a man who will adore
you for who you are. Are you scared
of him?

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Not really but I am not happy. He
said he loves me, but there is very
little to show this.

CANELLE
At your age I was only going out
with married men because they go
home after, they get out the way.
We were having fun, they kept the
boring stuff for their wives. (a
beat) Now I am dating younger men
over the internet, it is great fun.

Montage of Canelles web page with photos of her wearing sexy

cloths.
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He doesnt want to be alone, but he
doesnt really care about me.

16 INT.NIGHT PUB 16

Canelle and Emilia having are waiting to be served at the

bar. Young guy coming onto Emilia (Jump cut between lines).

YOUNG GUY
Hey!
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EMILIA
Hey!

YOUNG GUY
Kylie s ass... and Kelly Brooks
tits.

So, hmm, you are a natural blond

then?

YOUNG GUY (CONTD)

I am just not into a relationship

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at the moment, no, no.

Are you seeing anyone at the

moment?
It is not just the same girls going
with girls, nah

I like to spend time on my own, you

know, thinking...

I read Private Eye all the time, I

like it. Its good...

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I watched New Night the other day,
it is good

Would you call yourself a feminist

then? Isnt like sexist, isnt like
sexist?

I dont mind wearing a condom, It

is not the same. This is all what I
am saying.
So how many blocks youve been
then? ... Hmmm

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I would mary the first girl who
explains to me the off side rule.

I am not been funny about women.

They do not know what they do. That
is sexy that, boots like that...
sexy, you know. It is.

Rob Steward... Sexy..

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So huh, you want to go somewhere

else?

Canelle comes on to the Young Guy.

CANELLE
Women hit their sexual prime later
then men in life, it is usually in
their 40s. But we men hit our
peaks earlier, it is in their 20s

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and 30s. So you see my point, you
are better off with older women.

Emilias phone rings.

EMILIA
Oh hi! (a beat) I am sorry youre
having a hard time but I cant
talk. I am having a drink with
Canelle

Canelle grabs the Young Mans crotch

CANELLE
Are you married?
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Sorry?

CANELLE
Dont worry, it doesnt matter. I
said you look gorgeous.

Emilia checking her phone.

EMILIA
I cant believe he dump me over a
text message!!! After all the time
we spent together.

CANELLE
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Lets have an other drink

Canelle and Emilia drinking and having a laugh

17 INT. NEILS WAREHOUSE 17

Neil wakes up and checks the time. 3am . He calls Emilia from
his mobile, no answer the voice mail kicks in again. He tries
to call again.

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18 INT. NIGHT CLUB 18

Mobile phone inside Emilias bag showing 15 missed calls.

Emilia and Canelle dancing, having a hell of a good time.

19 INT. NEILS WAREHOUSE 19

Neil sitting on the toilet sending a text.

FADE OUT.

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INT. NEILS LIVING ROOM DAY
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Neil is sitting in an armchair, staring into emptiness.

Slow move in to Neils face looking at camera.

NEIL (V.O.)
Aristotle identifies three stages
of life. The life of pleasure, the
political life when interacting
with one community and the
contemplative live devoted to
grasping the ultimate nature of
things.

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INT.NIGHT NEILS BATHROOM 22

Neil is putting make up on

23 INT. NEILS LIVING ROOM DAY 23

Emilia appears by his site as they are not in the same room.
They talk to camera.

NEIL
The shit you have to go through in
this world just to survive...
Sometime once need to look at
himself in the mirror.

EMILIA
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By trying to isolate me from other
men and the rest of the
civilization. He tried to maintain
his prestence and drag me with you
in your individualist solitariness.

Slow move in to her face looking at camera.

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EMILIA (V.O.)
I felt at his complete mercy, half
of my brain was going numb and I
felt like that my life was over, It
has been a long time that I didnt
have an orgasm. So when he told me
we were spliting up it was a bliss.
Within a couple of weeks I started
to meet other men but it took a
while to recover and to start
having orgasms again.

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INT. VINTAGE CAFE - DAY 24

Neil (young as the first cafe scene) is observing discreetly

Emilia who is working as a waitress.

Emilia brings a cappuccino to Neil.

NEIL
Great! Thanks. I like your hair.
Your boyfriend must like it.

EMILIA
Maybe

Emilia walks away

FADE OUT.
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THE END

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