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CLOSE-UP
Her eyes are shifting as she write, flicking from one side
of the page to the other.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
She begins pacing with her hands on her hips before taking a
deep breath and walking back a few paces, over litter and
broken glass, in preporation for her shot. She carefully
jogs forward and kicks the ball, scoring a goal.
4 SCENE THREE 4
INT. FAMILY HOME. DAY
Charlies eyes are scanning the page again, reading over
what she has just read and preparing for her next paragraph.
She smiles and begins to write again.
CHARLIE (AS NARRATION)
Exploring the wilderness
5 SCENE FOUR 5
ESTABLISHING SHOT
The forest is quiet and scarce of people, the only noises
heard being that of animals. There is a squirrel sitting on
a branch.
ESTABLISHING SHOT
The alley is clearly un-safe and not a child-friendly place.
There is broken glass everywhere and litter is seen in
multiple areas. There is a pub nearby - presumably where her
parents are.
Charlie is walking through the alley cautiously, clearly she
does not feel comfortable in her environment.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
CLOSE-UP
Charlie has been crying and it is seen in her face that she
is paranoid and scared.
Loud noise is heard: something that
resembles that of a bird taking
flight, but could also be a drunken
man stumbling into the alley.
Charlie turns quickly to face the noise.
6 SCENE FIVE 6
INT. FAMILY HOME. DAY
Charlie is seen writing at the table.
8 SCENE SIX/SCREEN B 8
INT. SALON. UNCLEAR
An older lady is sat down on a salon bed as Charlie speaks
to her about what she is doing (this cannot be heard)
9 SCENE SEVEN 9
INT. FAMILY HOME. DAY
Charlie has filled in a majority of the provided homework
sheet and pauses for a brief moment to check she has enough
room to continue writing. She begins to write again.
CHARLIE (AS NARRATION)
Took part in a swimming tournament
10 SCENE EIGHT 10
INT. SWIMMING POOL. DAY
There is a swimming tournament happening in the sports
centre. Charlie is involved in one of the races and is
therefore wearing a swimming cap and goggles.
Charlie is seen submerging and re-emerging in the pool,
doing the breast stroke - her head is seen bobbing up and
down in the water.
EXTREME CLOSE-UP
Charlie takes a deep breath in, before she has to
re-submerge in the pool.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 5.
EXTREME CLOSE-UP
Charlie lets the breath out.
She is now in her bathroom at home, which is unhygenic and
outdated in design.
11 SCENE NINE 11
INT. FAMILY HOME. DAY
Charlie is sat at the table, still doing her homework. She
stops and looks around the room.
Her paper is full, but she still wishes to write. She has
already done more than she needed to.
Charlie stands up and is looking at a laptop bag on the
floor concerned and unsure, clearly she is not supposed to
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 6.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 7.
YOUNG BOY 2
Why would anyone want to play with
a loooooooser.
13 SCENE TEN/SCREEN B 13
15 SCENE TWELVE 15
EXT. STREET. EARLY EVENING
Charlies parents are holding hands as they walk down the
street. Smiling up at each other as they walk hand in hand
down the street. They are a picture of happiness.
Charlie is walking behind them, happy in their happiness.
She is smiling at them.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 8.
16 SCENE THIRTEEN 16
INT. FAMILY HOME. DAY
Charlies pen stops moving. She lifts her head to look at
the camera directly as she thinks.
CHARLIE (AS NARRATION)
When I grow up I want to be a good
mum.
FLASH OF WHITE
INT. HALLWAY NEAR BATHROOM DOOR. UNCLEAR
Charlies mother is hunched up by the door, sobbing and
drinking as Charlie watches, scared from afar.
FLASH OF WHITE
INT. FAMILY HOME. DAY