Pavichaya Sirikayon

Professor J Rodrick
English 115
30 October 2017

In the second essay assignment, we started the project space which is

show the space between people. I think this topic is easier than the first one.
Because we have to focus only space of people. But, it still difficult for me to
write in English words, also I dont know the many words. I had to look up the
Word in dictionary. I had to organize the sources that suit to the form of essay.
Especially for writing thesis that includes my idea and reason in one sentence.
The hardest is writing grammatically correct sentences. I confused about part of
speech and words order to arrange the sentences. I had to ask my friend for
checking and correcting them for me. By the way, I saw many mistake from the
first essay and try to fix it in the second essay. I proof how to write citation. I
hope I do it correct this time. In addition, I try to focus more in grammar and
various vocabulary.