Class 2 5-24-17 Frederick Douglass Essay was Frederick Douglass is a slave and“always treated badly. His master treated slaveslike they ‘were trash. Then the slave always had to all the stuff for the whites Frederick Douglass is important person because he wrote an autobiography it’s about his life how Frederick Douglass life was horrible and what he went through“ Wanted people to read it to change. Frederick Douglass writes about his experience as a slave in ordered to proves that slavery is bad for slave ~~ and slave owners. People who defended slavery believed that slavery wasn’t terrible for slaves. However, good Douglass argues that they were whipped regularly. in Excerpt 1 Douglass writes "He would whip her to make her hush ; and not until overcome by fatigue, would he cease to swing the blood- clotted cowskin.” This example shows that the master was mean to his mother. However Douglass argues that they had litle clothing. In Except 2, Douglass writes "The children unable to work in the field has neither shoes, stockings, jackets, nor trouser, given to them; their clothing consisted of two coarse line shirts per year.” This example show that slavery was horrible for slaves These examples from Douglass's narrative disprove the position of those who defended slavery by treating them wronglin so many way. © Defendants of slavery claimed that slavery was great because they got to control black ie Ne people. But Douglass wanted them to understand that slavery corrupts slave holders as well as J” coke slaves. In Excerpt 4 Douglass writes "I spent that day mostly in the woods, to go home and be whipped to death or stay in the woods and be starving to death." This example proves that Douglass master is trying to get Douglass and can’t find him. But Douglass argues with him that a turn him violent as a way of getting out of control. In Excerpt 2, Douglass writes, "Fromthe — ¢te®""* rising till the going down of the sun, he was cursing, raving, cutting, and slashing among the slave of the field, in the most frightful manner. This shows that Mr. Severe turn raging because of the way he treats the slaves. These examples from Douglass narrative disprove the position of those who defended slavery by show how the slave master changed and how they treated the slaves Douglass wrote Narrative Of The Life of Frederick Douglass because he wanted people to know how they were treated slave and how the slave holder becomes corrupts. He argues that slavery is bad for slaves and slave owners and that slaves went through a lot and slave s ‘owners are getting corrupts. 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