Name Ethan, Jay, Fin, Sam

Music Video

Artist Sadgasm

Song Creature

Feedback

Camera work is a bit too shaky - consider using a tripod.

The pan on the first shot after the tree is very jerky and should be smoother.

The band performance isnt convincing. The singular performances arent convincing.

Shot framing on band needs to be tighter.

The lip syncing has no intensity at all and doesnt match the song.

Youve used far too many long shots.

We discourage any nudity most strongly. We dont expect to see it. The bare shoulders are fine as
long as thats as far as it goes.

Student Comment