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‘You will write a 5-pagé paper using APA style, re-examining your philosophy. The philosophy paper for Portfolio.
‘the one that was written for Portfolio I, and should describe how your personal
philosophy has evolved since submission of Portfolio I. Your evolving philosophy should be based on your
experiences, textbooks, research, field observations, reflections, course readings, and discussions, as well as other
resources. You should examine various philosophies of education, including constructivism, and discuss how these
philosophies impact your personal philosophy. ‘The Portfolio TT paper should exemplify growth inthe understanding
And articulation of your philosophy of education. One of the essential questions is: “How does my personal
philosophy reflect the tenets ofthe Education Department's Conceptual Framework?”
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Personal Philosophy of Education:
Portfolio IT |
Taylor Hoey
September 30, 2017
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Introduction
A teacher's philosophy, while having core values, should always be growing, modifying,
and keeping the students as the central focus. Since writing my first philosophy paper, my
ence in classes,
personal principles of teaching have shifted and grown based on further exp
field and lab experience, research, and coming to find my personal style of teaching. Looking
back on my original paper, I still agree and strive for the things I wrote. However, I eafi now see
where my thinking has matured and adjusted as I have become more competent in my field. ‘The
points of my first philosophy paper that] would like to expand on are love and support
‘community, high expectations, and ie play. From my time in the Education Department
at Wesleyan College, I have found these four components to be important and the foundation of
my personal attitude and view of teaching. o)
Classroom Management
Classroom management might be one of the most important aspects of a classroom’s
environment, and what a teacher chooses or bases his or her classroom management off of can
make or break a suecessful classroom. Of course, I still believe in all that | wrote in my first
paper, such as using “brain bres” but there are specific strategies and techniques that I plan to
implement in my classroom. In my EDU 402 Classroom Management class that I took last year,
wwe discussed two different types of classroom management strategies that have been tried,
tested, and proven to be effective by many teachers across the nation. The two that appealed to
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me most were Love and Logis by Jim Fay and Whole Brain Teaching by Chris Biffle. { instantly
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believe that Love and Logie is hands-down one of the best set of techniques to use when
facing discipline issues in the elassroom, Love and Logie calls for teachers to encourage their
students towards positive behavior, teach students to problem solve for themselves, and to
humiliate or wrongly punish their students;
always handle situations in an empathetic manner. Love and Logie reprimands teachers that
instead, they recapmend that teachers should always
be empathetic towards their students (Fay, 2012). Empathy is at the core of the Love and Logic
reasoning, and this emphasis is what | admire most about the philosophy. | believe that empathy |
should always be the means of addressing every student in the classroom. It makes students feel
1, and appreciated, even if they do not realize it in the moment. There are some
loved, cared
favorites of mine from Love and Logie, such as going “Brain Dead” or using a Recovery area in
your classroom to separate a disruptive student from the class, but I intend to use most of the
concepts of the ideology in my classroom along with another discipline and management
principle called Whole Brain Teaching.
“The second approach to classroom management that I will be implementing in my
classroom is Whole Brain Teaching by Chris Biffle. This concept uses research and is designed
to target different parts of children’s brain, such as the motor cortex or the Nucleus Acumbens ae
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(which plays into pleasure activated by an uncertain reward), in order to increase engagement
and focus in the classroom (Biffle, 2017). Strategies from this inelude fun call-and-responses,
‘games, and point systems. Whole brain teaching, besides keeping children engaged and
interested, allows them to talk and think aloud to their peers. This is especially important in
schools whete many teachers expect students to be silent and still all day. Whole Brain Teaching
allows for that movement and expression that children need, while still keeping it in a controlled
environment where the teacher can call the class back to order and not lose instructional time. THoey 4
Jook forward to having my own classroom so that I can carry out this phenomenal management
style.
Classroom Dynamies
Ina similar light to classroom management, how a teacher creates and maintains a
classroom’s dynamics and environment is extremely important for the success and comfort of the .
community, cultivating fove and support, and having high expectations and standards of my
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students. To start, ereating a classroom community is ineredi
ly important to me. I believe that a
teacher must establish rapport with and produce a level of trust between the students. Shaping
community in the classroom, by doing things such as having routines, classroom trak
students, The classroom dynamics that I would like to foster in my classroom are building
ions, or :
spending time with and getting to know your students, provides stability, structure, and a sense
of classroom pride in the students and teacher. In my classroom placement this semester, I have
witnessed why having the chance to build community is so crucial. I am ina 4th grade classroom
that is departmentalized, meaning there are teachers for each subject and the students rotate »//”
through the classes during the day, much like middle and high school. When speaking to my host
teacher about it, she admitted that it is extremely difficult creating that classroom community and
rapport with stucents that can come naturally in a self-contained classroom. I can observe this
myself when | enter the room, by noticing more discipline issues and a chaotic feeling that
comes from the sense that the students are always in motion, changing from one class to the next.
| believe that this is an inappropriate method in schools because children this young still need the
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support and structure from a self-contained classroom. Not only does this set-up create an poor
environment for students to learn, it also creates a negative environment for teachers to teach.Hoey 5
Having community in the classroom is beneficial fo all those involved and essential to a
successful classroom.
A stvong sense of community in the classroom alone will not grant children with the full
backing they need; love and support also have to have large roles, When visiting the Ron Clark
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Academy last year, I witnessed a strong dose of that between the faculty and the students. Not
only do the teachers give their all in providing the best education to their students at the Ron
Clark Academy, they also strive to be there emotionally for the students, to truly show them that
they love them and will help them through any situation, In Ron Clark's book, The End of
‘Molasses Classes (2012), he states that “it's our job to inspire students to dream big and then to
: we _Stow them that we believe their dream i possible” (p, 1). Reading about the love and support he
TY sand his teachers give, and then being able to see it in person really opened my eyes. I believe that
in a nurturing environment, children will thrive, And these children at the Ron Clark Academy
\were thriving, I want to love, support, and encourage every single student in all chat they do, not
only because that is who I am as a person, but because I have seen the positive outcome myself.
As teachers, we do not fully know what a student’s family life is like and what happens behind
ives that believes in them or even smiles
closed door; a teacher could be the only person in their
‘at them, This is what all teachers should do, and I know it is what I will give to my students.
“The final part of classroom dynamics that I believe is critical to leaming is setting high
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expectations and goals, As a teacher, | never want my students to think that I believe them to be
incompetent or unable to reach their goals. I wish to instill high standards and expectations of
excellence, Once again, Ron Clark and his school are the sh g beacons that teachers should
look to. The energy level at the school is always at one hundred percent and there are never
excuses for not doing their work or for bad behavior. The tone that is set at the Ron ClarkHoey 6
Academy says to students that they know these children are intelligent and are capable of
whatever they put their minds to. There are no excuses at the Ron Clark Academy, and the |
expectations are the same for everyone no matter what their background is, Ron Clark (2012)
\writes in his book that teachers need to “believe that every child can learn, regardless of
jes, emotional or behavioral problems, or the economic situation of
ethnicity, learning disabi
the family” (p. 168). Tis mindset and accountability strongly appeal to me and I will strive to
reoreate that level of energy, intensity, and expectation in my future classroom,
Nature and Play
From the beginning of my journey in the Education Department, I knew that involving.
nature and the outdoors would become a cornerstone piece of my personal philosophy. A aia
that | am currently taking called Children, Nature, and Society, has helped fine-tune and reiterate
how meaningful itis to me. Students are losing touch with nature and the natural world,
becoming more and more interested in their digital devices and the comforts of the indoors.
Because of this, they are developing what is known as Nature-Deficit Disorder, a term coined by
Richard Louv in his book Last Child in the Woods: Saving Our Children from Nature-Deficit
Disorder (2008). Nature is all around us and yet it seems that we as a society have made it
impossible for children to go outside, Nature, however, can help with a plethora of children’s
issues such as obesity and ADHD. Louy (2008) explains in his book that research has shown,
“nature may be useful asa therapy for Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder used with or,
when appropriate, even replacing medications or behavioral therapies” (p. 100). Nature has
restorative properties that cannot exaetlbe explained, but are nonetheless present. I do not want
to ignore these findings, nor do I wish to further deprive children of nature. These facts about
hature mirror research that has been done about play, and how the lack of play causes socialHoey 7
anxiety, physical health issues, and neurological disadvantages, as stated by Frost, Wortham, and
Reifel (2012, p. 78-80). In my classroom, I will work to provide many opportunities for children
to be outside, whether that be for teaching lessons, having independent reading time, or allowing
for extra recess. Children are innately drawn to nature and they should not have to sacrifice that
to have an education.
Constructivism
In my original philosophy paper, I leaned heavily towards the educational theory of
Progressivism, Now, with my additional classes, experience, and knowledge, I see that lam also
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inclined toward Conszuovlen. have always been a firm believer in hands-on experience and
learning from these experiences, whether they are successes or failures. This plays well into the
definition of Constructivist theory stated by Catherine Twomey Fosnot and Randall Stewart
Perry (2005) in their book Constructivism: Theory, Perspectives, and Practice, Fosnot and Perry
articulate that Constructivism is a theory that “construes learning as an interpretive, recursive,
nonlinear building process by active learners interacting with their surroundings” (p. 15).
Learning in the Constructivist theory commends making mistakes or having failure because they
are just as beneficial learning events as successes are. I agree wholeheartedly with this theory
because the teacher needs to provide opportunities where the students can explore, experiment, ~~
and find solutions themselves or with the gentle guide of the teacher. Answers should never just
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be given to students, and so teaching with a Constructivist theory in mind will help combat that.
Constructivist theory, along with Progressivism, ate now at the forefront of my personal teack
values, and | can only imagine that my philosophies and theories will keep expanding as I Jearn
different approaches and new research has been done.Hoey 8
Conelusion |
‘A teacher's philosophy, while its core makeup might stay the same, will be evolving,
developing, and morphing to fit the students’ needs and keep up with the times. | am truly
‘grateful for my Wesleyan education and the Education Department for helping and guiding me to
shape and realize my own personal outlook of teaching. I feel confident going into the workforce
with a clear understanding that my core ideology contains certain classroom management
techniques, classroom dynamics goals, nature and play, and the Constructivist theory. I look
forward to implementing my philosophy in the future to create a successful, engaging, and
student-focused classroom.
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References
Biffle, Chris (2017). Whole Brain Teaching for Challenging Kids, Retrieved from
http://wholebrainteaching.com/.
Clark, Ron (2012). The End of Molasses Classes: Getting Our Kids Unstuck; 101 Extraordinary
‘Solutions for Parents and Teachers. New York, New York: Touchstone, A Division of
Simon & Schuster, Ine.
Fay, Jim, 9 Essential Skills for the Love and Logic Classroom: Low Stress Strategies for Highly
‘Successful Educators. United States of America: Love and Logic Institute, Ine.
/ Fosnot, C
& Perry, R. S. (1996). Construetivi
am: A psychological theory of learning,
Constructivism: Theory, perspectives, and practice, 2, 8-33.
/ Frost, J. Le, Reifel $., Wortham S, C, (2012). Foundations of American Edueation, Sixth Edition.
Upper Saddle River, New Jersey: Pearson Education, Ine,
Louy, Richard (2008). Last Child in the Woods: Saving Our Children from Nature-Deficit
Disorder. Chapel Hill, North Carolina: Algonquin Books of Chapel Hill.