Hershey's "My Dad"

by Faith Ivy

Submission date: 04-Nov-2017 11:48PM (UT C-0500)

Submission ID: 874474662
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become problematic when they attempt to stand alone as a complete sentence. T he most
common version of this mistake occurs when a writer mistakes a gerund (a verb that acts like a
noun) f or a main verb, as in the f ollowing sentence: "In bed reading Shakespeare f rom dusk to
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Comment 1
but how??? this doesn't make sense

Comment 2
good - just need to make intro list parallel

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