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Swallow the Air is a collection of interlinked short stories written by Tara June Winch,
which describes the journey of protagonist May Gibson, a half-Aboriginal (of the
Wiradjuri tribe) half-white teenage girl. May leaves home in search of her ancestral
family following her mother's suicide and a breakdown in her home life with her brother,
Billy, and her Aunt. The narrative follows her journey from Wollongong to Sydney, to
Darwin and to her traditional homeland along the Lachlan River.
Chapter 2: Grab
Summary: How this chapter connects with the concept of Discovery
The theme of discovery within chapter 2 encompasses the ideas of personal, historical
and cultural discoveries.
- Bad luck until she won the Tip Top Bread Grocery Grab. After the win,
everything seemed to be a gamble, a game. (pg 13) This quote connects to the
idea that discoveries and their ramifications may differ for individuals and their
worlds. June refers to the consequences as a gamble, a game to highlight the
lack of thought process and intention that is associated with the discovery. Aunty
uses this win, this newfound discovery of luck/hope as an excuse to gamble her
life away.
- We saw her start to panic and skip a bunch of aisles, targeting the trolley
towards the frozen food section. (pg 15)
- We dont even own a bloody freezer! (pg 15)
These quotes symbolise the lack of thought and consideration linked to the future
consequences. This concept alludes to the colonisation of Australia, the first fleet
arriving and colonising land without considering the sacredness of the land for the
Aboriginal people.
How does Tara June Winch explore the concept of Discovery in chapter 2, Grab?
Statement Technique Example Effect Link to question
The theme of discovery Metaphor After the This quote connects to the The theme of discovery is
within chapter two win idea that discoveries and therefore explored through
encompasses prominent everything their ramifications may differ language devices such as
ideas relating to both seemed to for individuals and their metaphors. Through this, the
personal and historical be a game, a worlds. June refers to the ramifications of a personal
discoveries. gamble. pg consequences as a game, a discovery can have far
13 gamble as an allusion reaching effects on both the
towards the colonisation of individual and others,
Australia. This reference symbolising past historical
therefore suggests the discoveries which had
historical mistakes white substantial effects on the
settlers made, not greater community.
considering the sacredness
of the land for Aboriginal
people and therefore taking
before considering the future
consequences.
Discoveries are Imagery Her finger The deliberate use of Discoveries are therefore
explored in chapter two wrapped imagery propels the notion explored through the power of
Grab through a sense tight over the that discoveries can be imagery, which ultimately
of personal necessity. trolley intensely meaningful in ways provides readers with greater
June enforces this handle, light that may be emotional. The understandings and
concept of exploring brown vivid imagery stimulates emotional awareness.
discoveries through vivid knuckles ideas of necessity, wrapped Through this, intense emotion
imagery. pushed over tight, brown knuckles pushed is portrayed, allowing for both
from the over the grip. This gives the characters and readers to
grip pg 14 effect of urgency, and experience fresh and
personal want, which evokes meaningful encounters.
an intense emotional
response.
The authenticity Colloquial We dont Colloquial language enforces This allows for greater
generated through language even own a the idea of individuals awareness of the far reaching
language emphasises bloody reacting differently to impacts that discoveries can
the concept that freezer pg discoveries and its induce. Lastly, colloquial
discoveries can be 15 ramifications. Colloquial language allows for individual
challenged when viewed language also allows for characters to communicate
from different characterisation, meaning their personal, spiritual and
perspectives and their readers can easily interpret cultural diversities, this gives
worth may be and understand the effects it reason behind the exploration
reassessed over time. has on distinct characters. towards a new discovery.
Winch offers an escape for the audience and May who resort the beach for solace during her time
of abandonment, shown in the imagery, the tide is flowing in... I know I am home. Yet such
connections are compromised by the antagonism she encounters at the beach shown in the
expletive, fuck off coons and depicts the racial barriers despite a 20 th century context.
Furthermore, her rape on the beach is conveyed through the rapists colloquial language, this
gunna show ya where ya dont belong dumb black bitch to exemplify the aggression and hatred
of white Australians towards Aborigines which forces the audience to understand the pain she
deals with due to her ethnicity and further strengthens her sense of isolation. The violence of the
alliterated black bitch dramatises the experience and is felt more painfully by May than the
physical pain of her slashed palms to further convey her suffering and reinforce her sense of
isolation within society. Winch portrays how barriers can exacerbate an individuals sense of
alienation and offer no respite.
How does Tara June Winch explore the concept of discovery in this chapter?
Statement Technique Example Effect Link to question
Can occur under extreme Colloquial language this gunna show Exemplify the aggression and
and difficult situations or ya where ya dont hatred of white Australians
events. belong dumb towards Aborigines which
black bitch forces the audience to
understand the pain she deals
with due to her ethnicity and
further strengthens her sense of
isolation.
How does tara june winch explore the concept of discovery in chapter 5?
Storytelling
within aboriginal
spirituality is
fundamental to
the shaping of
identity and
discovering a
sense of self
It happened so fast. Wed never stepped between them. Billy pulled back Craigs arm,
grabbing at its thickness. - Discoveries can be sudden and unexpected. Craig was
known for his rage and violent and abusing behaviour, and had impacted the characters
immensely when he had hit Billy.
The more he wasnt there, the more I realised too, we were all gone, in this chapter,
May had discovered how distant her and her family actually were. This discovery was
sudden and unexpected and was confronting for both her and Billy and offered May new
understandings and renewed perceptions of herself, Craig and Aunty. Through the
conflict she knew that the violence in the family was due to Craigs rage and all Billy
wanted to do was escape with her, to leave their home and never return. May had
realised that Billy had meant it when he said Im not comin back, May, Not ever. Let's
go, again this relates back to the concept of discoveries being sudden or unexpected,
as May hadnt expected Billy to actually leave her and Aunty.
Chapter 7: To Run
Summary: How this chapter connects with the concept of Discovery
"I would be the mango that breaks off the stem into my dad's fingers, the apple of
his eye before I slide into the picking bag." - Wants to be related to her Father/ be
known to him; this quote demonstrates her longing of her father, wanting to be in his
hands and the apple of his eye. She aspires to go on a adventure (travel) to find her
Father in Darwin. Her dreams to discover what, who and where he really is and who he
has become is prominent within chapter seven, To Run. This chapter relates to
discovery as she attempts to discover what her father is like all these years ahead of her
vague childhood memories of him. She seeks this adventure and attempts to discover
where her roots lie (to run and find her father). Her vivid and very well described
dreams are a way of discovering herself and her train of thought imagery is used
throughout the description of her dreams. Discoveries can be fresh and intensely
meaningful.. Discoveries.. Can also be confronting and provocative, rediscovering
something that has been lost, forgotten or concealed. May (protagonist) is trying to
rediscover her father before her vague memories of him are gone and forgotten and lost.
As her father is such a touchy topic her fresh wounds of her father is a confronting topic
as she doesn't have any form of relationship with him. This chapter connects to
Discovery as her ultimate goal is to discover a chapter of her life that has been lost,
forgotten and and shoved to the side (chapter of her life meaning knowing her father).
Chapter 8: Territory
Key features of plot development
May is on her way to the Northern territory in search of her dad with Pete, a truckie.
Theyre on their way to the races. As they approach the top end of the trip Pete and May
open up about their family background with May expressing how her olive skin tone
originates from her mother's Aboriginal heritage relating to the context & development of
the plot.
Techniques
Rhetorical questions - How could i forget him? - May flashes back to the pain that
came out of her childhood from her ruthless father's actions.
- Who was going to beat her mind? Represents her fear and paranoia as if her
mind was in constant torture.
Truncated sentences - I wouldnt miss that feeling again. If I made it through.
Represents how her sickness was not just physical but emotional as well as the
wait she has to endure in order to find her father is excessively hard and how she
was on the break of falling apart as she is unsure if she can make it through.
- Meals like this could either cure the pain or feed it. I waited. Expresses how May
is waiting to see if what she is searching for is actually the cure to her pain.
Sensory imagery - he shouted me baked beans, fried eggs, and bacon and a cup
of coffee, for the road. The grease slipped out of the edges of my lips.
Motif - The recurring Motif of the Mangoes symbolises The unattainable desire
for May to Find the family she wished she had.
Metaphor - Territory, May is entering into a new territory within her life as she is
adventuring into a new stage of her life as she is traveling to the Northern
Territory
Alliteration - Petes Pink skin is camouflaged among the sea of red dirt.
I know all men are bastards. Even if youre not, even if youre just too young to be
a bastard - dont worry you will be one day. - Anaphora - emphasising that from her
past experiences May discovered all men are the same, out for self gain and control
over women.
We rest in the houses as warm tropical storms light up the bruised sky. - Imagery
and personification
How does Tara June Winch explore the concept of Discovery in Chapter: 11
Metaphor
Mays discoveries during chapter 12 relate closely to her personal relationships, and
follows her path to discovering that she would like to leave, to find family, and more
importantly somewhere safe. May discovers how others view her (As not much more
than a common criminal) and sets her in motion for wanting to better herself (Through
seeking to know more about her heritage and family).
How does Tara June Winch explore the concept of Discovery in chapter 12
(Painted Dreaming)
How does Tara June Winch explore the concept of discovery in Chapter 13?
Statement Technique Example Effect Link to
Question
Colloquial Give me ya
Language number, can stay
with me and me
missus, wed be
happy to have ya.
She cooks a bloody
good roast that
woman!
Personification The land a basin of
scorched anguish
Twilight Devour
Imagery Against the This quote depicts that This highlights that one's need
. Discoveries can be Anaphora fence I could May is trying to find for discovery can become
sudden or unexpected, their trace back another connection, as apparent through vigilant
or they can emerge to she doesnt know who searching and the need to obtain
from a process of someones her mum is anymore. a connection with something.
deliberate and careful face, their
planning evoked by mouth, their
curiosity, necessity or eye socket,
wonder their ear. I
tried so
many times
to find my
mothers,
but I could
only pretend
to recognise
her, her real
face is lost.
. They can also be Imagery I would It is symbolic of her mum This demonstrates that some
confronting and come to the and source of discoveries can be confronting
provocative jacaranda connection to place and and challenging , as recognising
tree, its family and also shows the suffering of someone can be
dogwood that it is a barrier. The difficult to accept.
trunk tree is in pain, which
writhing represents her mums
through the pain and desperation.
palings.
. Discoveries can be Imagery Sometimes This denotes that Mays This conveys that discoveries
fresh and intensely the other mothers legacy and can be intensely meaningful and
meaningful in ways trees roots memories are being create an emotional response,
they may be would be so taken over, which as the realisation of a situation
emotional, creative, invading that wreaks Mays can be difficult to comprehend.
intellectual, physical they would foundations and causing
and spiritual splinter negative impacts, as she
plumbing, is trying to hold onto
unbloating something that needs to
reservoir. be set free.
Though the
jacaranda
shared its
ground.
. Discoveries and Personificati It stayed Vulnerability is the only This alludes that discoveries can
discovering can offer on naked for a thing May can remember change a persons perception of
new understandings Metaphor lot of the about her mum, which others and alter the way
and renewed year, until I is symbolised through someone is viewed.
perceptions of only the bareness of the tree.
ourselves and others remembered
its familiar
bareness.
. The ramifications of Emotive And then Mays mother is not This illustrates that
particular discoveries language there would there anymore. There is consequences of certain
may differ for be none, no no evidence of the good discoveries can cause different
individuals and their evidence of parts anymore, people impacts of different people and
worlds its beauty, only remember her can lead to the discovery that
only the death (the end) changes have occurred.
watery
stains of a
visit.
Mays physical and emotional pain acts as a catalyst to discover herself, her familial
heritage and her cultural identity. This is explored through Winchs effective use of the
leitmotif of Pain. I could run away from the pain my family holds is an example of this.In
order for May to reconcile her pain, learn from its experiences, and discover the full
extent of her emotional life and indigenous way of thinking, she needs to first locate and
then actively escape the sources of her pain; a broken family life, a traumatic sexual
assault and the broken dream of reuniting with her father. This pain is initially confronting
and provocative, but in Mays case it ultimately her to rediscover the lost, forgotten and
concealed elements of her indigenous heritage. Therefore, Winchs use of leitmotifs
portrays how discoveries can be fresh and intensely meaningful, confronting and
provocative and can involve rediscovering something that has been lost forgotten or
concealed.
Mays response to adversities she faced transforms the assumptions of readers about
the problematic nature of identity, memory and the ideal means to discover the inner
core of our intellectual and spiritual being. This is depicted through the recurring theme
of identity. For example, My mother knows that I am home, at the water I am always
home. Aunty and my brother, we are from the same people, we are of the Wiradjuri
nation, hard water. In order to discover her concealed Indigenous identity and
understand herself as a strong Wiradjuri woman, May deliberately sets out to discover
her past, familial origins and cultural history. Her eventual discovery of self emerges
from a combination of deliberately planned and unexpected challenges, which test her
ability to perceive the world as an Indigenous thinker, immersed in the dreamtime. Thus,
discoveries can lead us to new worlds and values, stimulate new ideas, and enable us to
speculate about future possibilities.
Mays discoveries were dependent on her cultural and historical contexts, which lead to
the discovery of self. This is shown through Winchs use of an extended metaphor. My
mother knows that I am home, at the water I am always home. Aunty and my brother, we
are from the same people, we are of the Wiradjuri nation, hard water. The extended
metaphor used by Winch to compare water with memory and culture highlights how
Aboriginal identity is inextricably linked to the land of their origins. This historical and
cultural ideal directly impacts what and how May discovers herself. Primarily by the way
in which she considers her familial origins to be from the hard water. Winch has
explored the concept of discovery in Home as Mays discoveries and process of
discovering relied on her cultural and historical context.
Through the process of Mays discoveries, Winch has lead the reader to new worlds and
values, stimulated new ideas, and provoked speculation about future possibilities. This is
portrayed by Winchs effective use of sensory imagery. Walls compress into the ground,
rooftops twist over leveled clay, fences warn me off, pipes penetrate cement blocks,
toilets sit beside sinks in the air Is an example of this. Winchs use of sensory imagery
leaves a lasting impression on the reader as it evokes an emotional response. The use
of sensory imagery to evoke an emotional response leads the reader to new worlds and
values, stimulates new ideas, and enables them to speculate about future possibilities.