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I corrected the Works Cited page as well as the in-paper citations so that my paper would
be in APA format. I also elaborated more on my personal writing process since there were
sections of that paragraph that could have been more detailed. I have learned that during my
writing and revision process tends to remain the same for my papers. I start revising by having
someone read my essay and they give me feedback. I take that feedback and fix my paper. I have
also noticed that I focus on editing while writing my paper before revision. I want to make sure
that my grammar, spelling, and punctuation is perfect, so I do not have to necessarily focus on
the editing portion of my writing process. This can sometimes take my focus off of my content
leading to organizational errors. If this happens, I have to make sure I am referring back to my