Author: Cio 4 a LENS ANAYLSIS Peer Review r= __Chousoy Sito __ Dr. Medina, LEAD CTW1-Education and Identity, Fall 2017 A lens provides a concept through which to interpreta text that reveals more complex understandings than the text on its own eC Sk ie ke Prove a unig odton heth esanal or ates ies dcusedin te | aes | ng | Ger} rest of essay? Provide a definition or summary explanation for the lens being applied? (Does it “refocus” @ no | sorror Freire or Hayes to fit the discussion of The Other Wes Moore?) Provide a clear thesis with an explanation of how the lens affects the reading and si SORTOF interpretation of The Other Wes Moore? tee aed a personal Sxory in iMtroducHon. > So add arnore cllor thesis (EERE eek ee ee Use the lens (meritocracy/liberation education) in the topic sentences to make a claim about No | sorTOF The Other Wes Moore? eg Provide relevant quotes from each text to provide evidence for the claim and clarification for Woe eoxr on the lens (or) provide detailed paraphrase from either texts for these effects? Provide substantial analysis following the claim and evidence (Point and Illustration) that explain how the lens quote focuses the reading of The Other Wes Moore to demonstrate how | YES | NO meritocracy or problem-posing/banking can be seen in Wes Moore? Recommendations AMONZe Hore thon SuMmonze. You Nant sone qrear AWDALS OMA L with so just e\\nrloovarA t a a lor © Wor wit Hove’Coe ers Draw logical analytical outcomes trom the evidence/quote presented? oes the analysis demonstrate critical thinking through the depth of complexity/nvance? =e Keep academic aucience in ming? Recommendations NW Siavied +o analiZe, ys try 4 90 | OWN wre (MH gapth , caso relaxe BlAdMS pack XO werikvemey EXIM Maintain MUA intext citation format and Works Cited? no. | sorr oF ‘Maintain concise language thoughout? no | sorror no | Gad Clear sentences that avoid contusion? v0 | ers no | sort oF Recommendations: Welade 14 HACK A WES MIT, QrLar idvag Your Bxplin WM Moor Peck ones | Avoid S paragraph 3 things in thess, with 1 thing per body paragraph? ve No | sort oF ves ‘Avoid cliché or over abstract langusge? sonr or Recommendations: intro isa bit lich, try +0 Od O QerSNaL Story eet. ‘Adapted from Dr. Julia Voss