To: Federal Aviation Administration

From: Kaleb Hill

Date: November 9, 2017
Subject: Design Revision Suggestion (Exercise 4)

I believe this document should be revised with less text and more color.
When most people look at this document, they are going to scan the information and not retain
any of it. If there was less text and smaller bullet points, there is a greater chance of the message
you are trying to convey to get across to your audience.
Doing any of these revisions will improve the users ability to read and remember the safety tips
provided.