TO: Professor J

FROM: Michael L

SUBJECT: Exercise 2 page 109

DATE: 11/3/17

The GYT: Get Yourself Tested Campaign

The way I would revise this header to make it into question goes as follows:
Are you apart of the Get Yourself Tested Campaign?
The way I would change this header to make it into a short sentence goes as follows:
It is imperative that sexually active individuals join the Get Yourself Tested Campaign (GYT).

National HIV and STD Testing Resources

The way I would revise this header to make it into a question goes as follows:
Where can I find resources for HIV and STD testing?
The way I would change this header to make it into a short sentence goes as follows:
There are HIV and STD resources that are available for sexually active individuals.

STD Awareness Resource Site

The way I would revise this header to make it into question goes as follows:
Is there a site that raises awareness of STDs?
The way I would change this header to make it into a short sentence goes as follows:
A site raising awareness of STDs is available for anyone with internet and a computer.
STD Prevention Materials
The way I would revise this header to make it into question goes as follows:
Where can I find STD Prevention Materials?
The way I would change this header to make it into a short sentence goes as follows:
Kits, documents, and other prevention materials are at your disposal.
The Division of STD Prevention's Twitter account
The way I would revise this header to make it into question goes as follows:
What social media is available for STD prevention?
The way I would change this header to make it into a short sentence goes as follows:
Social media is a great resource that can mitigate the spread of STDs.
Which revision do you consider more appropriate for the audience and the purpose of this letter?
I think using questions as the headers are more appropriate for this audience. In my opinion, asking the
reader a question is more persuasive than short sentences and phrases. The questions are more
effective because they allow the topic of HIV and STD prevention to be more individualized.