Reflection For Paper 2

Corrections I made to the paper involve changing the alignment of the paper, fixing the

font, changing certain words to the appropriate one, fixing the random capitalization in

Berkkenkotters name, fixing the spacing for works cited, fixing the citations to include proper

italics, and creating new paragraphs. I made these corrections because they were suggested

corrections that were made in the feedback I was given. Also, most of these corrections were

silly mistakes that need to be fixed to prevent possibly confusing the reader like the one random

addition of the letter F to a word in my paper. What Ive learned about my writing and revision

process is that in order to improve my writing I need to be willing to improve my own process

and not just understand it.