teacher who is retiring. You have been asked to give a farewell speech. Use the notes below about your teacher to write your speech Number of years teaching at your school She has been teaching at our school for 15 years Previous schools Before she came to our school, she worked at SMK Jerami Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu Achievements Being a goos teacher, she has gained some success -100% passes English Language Every year, she has helped the school to have 100% passes English Language in SPM Examinations -innovative Teacher Award Her biggest achievement is when she was awarded the innovative teacher of the year by our state education department Contributions to the school For the past 15 years, she contributed a lot to our school. -Head of English Panel She is the head of English Panel of our school. -teacher advisor debating team She is also the teacher advisor of the school debate team. -organiser charity events She has also become the organiser of our school charity events Teachers plan after retirement She is going to have alot of time for herself and her family. She personally mentioned to me that she has a few plans after her retirement. -plan 1 ( give your own idea) I know that she loves travelling and she has been longing to visit Nami Island in Korea. -plan 2 ( give your own idea) She also loves baking cakes and cookies and she once told me that she would open a bakery shop. Your opinion of the teacher Personally, I really respect and admire Puan Aminah binti Abdullah because she is kind and loving. One good memory you have of your teacher Last year, when my mother died, she helped me a lot . she comforted when I felt miserable. She offered me advice and money. I will never forget her kindness Wish your teacher well for the future I hope that Puan Aminah will have a good life and health and be happy always. First step: Construct sentences using the phrases given to make them meaningful .
She has been teaching at our school
for 15 years.Before she came to our school, she worked at SMK Jerami Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu. Being a goos teacher, she has gained some success . Every year, she has helped the school to have 100% passes English Language in SPM Examinations. Her biggest achievement is when she was awarded the innovative teacher of the year by our state education department. For the past 15 years, she contributed a lot to our school. She is the head of English Panel of our school. She is also the teacher advisor of the school debate team. She has also become the organiser of our school charity events. She is going to have alot of time for herself and her family. She personally mentuoned to me that she has a few plans after her retirement. I know that she loves travelling and she has been longing to visit Nami Island in Korea. She also loves baking cakes and cookies and she once told me that she would open a bakery shop. Personally, I really respect and admire Puan Aminah binti Abdullah because she is kind and loving. Last year, when my mother died, she helped me a lot . she comforted when I felt miserable. She offered me advice and money. I will never forget her kindness. I hope that Puan Aminah will have a good life and health and be happy always. Second step: use an appropriate format and lay-out. Greeting + audience + title/purpose of the speech
Good morning/ A The principal,
very Good beloved Puan Aminah morning binti Abdullah, teachers And fellow students
On this special day, I would to deliver a
speech to bid farewell to Puan Aminah binti Abdullah who is retiring soon. Good morning to the principal, beloved Puan Aminah binti Abdullah, teachers and fellow students. On this very special day, I would like to deliver a speech to bid farewell to our beloved English teacher, Puan Aminah binti Abdullah.
Step 3: write a preceeding
statement = a sentence/ or two sentences that will link the intro and the content points.
Write a brief information about
Puan Aminah.
As you all know, Puan Aminah is one
of our English teacher. She will retire at the end of this week. Let me talk about her.
Step 4: state all the content points,
one by one.
She has been teaching at our school
for 15 years.Before she came to our school, she worked at SMK Jerami Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu. Being a goos teacher, she has gained some success . Every year, she has helped the school to have 100% passes English Language in SPM Examinations. Her biggest achievement is when she was awarded the innovative teacher of the year by our state education department. For the past 15 years, she contributed a lot to our school. She is the head of English Panel of our school. She is also the teacher advisor of the school debate team. She has also become the organiser of our school charity events. She is going to have alot of time for herself and her family. She personally mentuoned to me that she has a few plans after her retirement. I know that she loves travelling and she has been longing to visit Nami Island in Korea. She also loves baking cakes and cookies and she once told me that she would open a bakery shop. Personally, I really respect and admire Puan Aminah binti Abdullah because she is kind and loving. Last year, when my mother died, she helped me a lot . she comforted when I felt miserable. She offered me advice and money. I will never forget her kindness. I hope that Puan Aminah will have a good life and health and be happy always.
Step 5: Give more information about
the points= relevant info/ further elaborations on the points.
She has been teaching at our school
for 15 years. She came to our school in 2005. Before she came to our school, she worked at SMK Jerami Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu. She taught at the school for 8 years before asking for transfer. Being a good teacher, she has gained some success . Every year, she has helped the school to have 100% passes English Language in SPM Examinations. She works very hard and she is very determined in her work.Her biggest achievement is when she was awarded the innovative teacher of the year by our state education department. She has innovated her teaching techniques and approches making all her lessons very interesting and fun. For the past 15 years, she contributed a lot to our school. She is the head of English Panel of our school. She is also the teacher advisor of the school debate team. Through her guidance, our debate team has won the competition for three consecutive years. She has also become the organiser of our school charity events. With her help, we have managed to raise a fund to help our needy students. She is going to have alot of time for herself and her family. She personally mentioned to me that she has thought a few plans after her retirement. I know that she loves travelling and she has been longing to visit Nami Island in Korea. She also loves baking cakes and cookies and she once told me that she would open a bakery shop. Personally, I really respect and admire Puan Aminah binti Abdullah because she is kind and loving. Last year, when my mother died, she helped me a lot . she comforted when I felt miserable. She offered me advice and money. I will never forget her kindness. I hope that Puan Aminah will have a good life and health and be happy always. Step 6: write an appropriate ending
I would like to end my speech with
this special and meaningful quotes, a great teacher like Puan Aminah will always inspire us to be successful and make our dreams come true. Thats all, thank you.