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Tommy Ervin

Ms. Jacobs

Freshman comp II

12/5/17

Portfolio Reflection

This was a very long and stressful revision process. I had many mistakes and errors but

the most errors were in grammar and MLA formatting. My grammar errors include run on

sentences and many comma and punctuation errors. My MLA formatting errors were I used to

wrong font in the title and I forgot to include page numbers. I corrected these errors by going

over my graded essays and reviewing them. After going over the graded essays I changed

everything I needed to change by using track changes. I didnt face no difficulty in making these

corrections. I didnt because I just followed my graded essays and changed everything that was

in red. Also I changed my essay based on the comments that you wrote. The comments and the

feedback were very helpful in understanding my errors and correcting them. Without them I

really wouldnt know how to revise my essay to make it better.

My critical approach essay needed the less improvement. It did because there were less

mistakes in this essay and there where way more good comments then bad ones. Also I got the

better grade on it so I knew it needed the less improvement. I think my poetry analysis essay

needed to most improvement. I knew this because I had so many errors in this one. I had

grammar and a whole lot of MLA errors in this one. Also I knew this essay needed to most

improvement because of the bad feedback and comments. Rereading the assignment sheets
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helped in making content related revisions. It did because I was able to understand the

assignment better and I was also to include all the details that I needed.