The majority of the changes that were made to the Autoethnography were small fixes

with the citation and just adding more detail to bring it all together. Specifically the topics of

discourses and rhetorical situation needed some more details added to them. The personal writing

process and influence of the community were some of the better paragraphs and very little detail

needed to be added to it. Changes were made through the notes on the grading rubric we received

back. I made the changes to it to make everything more clear and detailed as well as fix a few

small errors in formatting. For the next paper I will need to use more citations and be more

detailed overall in the writing. Being less general in what I write will fix a lot of the problems by

connecting everything together and making the examples I give more clear. I've learned that I

should revise more often, and giving it to other people to revise is actually extremely helpful, my

sister did a lot to help me revise this first paper.