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Jose Duran
Professor Ditch
English 115
27 September 2017
Over time, I have noticed that I behave in a primarily masculine way across different
gendered spaces. I also noticed that I have behave in a feminine way in some instances. Acting in
either a masculine or feminine way does not determine what sex I am or what gender I closely
associate with. Human beings should be able to demonstrate different types of behaviors without
the fear of being shamed for exhibiting those actions. Through the experiences of myself and
many others, I believe that gender is a social construct used to limit and restrict those who look,
act or sound differently from everyone else. I act differently in specific spaces because if I dont
act in a certain way, I would face social consequences such as ridicule and shame.
From the moment a child is born, decisions about its gender are already being
constructed. While a childs sex is established in a hospital room, a childs gender could
only be determined by that childs future choice. This is a problem because when people assume
a childs gender, that child may grow up feeling like an outsider. When a child grows up
confused about who they are, they may not excel in things like academics, sports or social skills
because they are too busy figuring out themselves. Aaron Devor stated in his article Becoming
Members of Society: The Social Meanings of Gender that, As we move through our lives,
society demands different gender performances from us and rewards, tolerates or punishes us
differently for conformity to, or digression from, social norms (35). When kids grow up, certain
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expectations are laid upon them. He makes the point that no matter how old we get, these
expectations never escape us. Boys are expected to be tough, strong and emotionless. Girls are
expected to be sweet, weak and emotional. Not only do these expectations stay with them
Gender is a fluid idea that allows one to freely cross through masculine and feminine
territory. Gender shouldnt be defined by one line that divides an entire world of people,
incapable of crossing between both sides because all genders are human and we all do the same
things for the most part. No matter what gender you are, you shouldnt be judged for doing
something that is more masculine or feminine. Even I am guilty for defying masculine ideals in
everyday life. I am not any less of a man for doing things that a woman would do. We are all
human beings and we shouldnt be persecuted for doing things as we please. Gender should be a
gray area where people may roam and do whatever they please or deem is right without the fear
of suffering the consequences for their actions. Gender is a gray area because a person may feel
that they are neither fully male or female. When society accepts this as fact, countless gender
boundaries would be broken because there would be no need for them anymore. In Judith
Lorbers, Night to His Day: The Social Construction of Gender she asserts that For human
manhood, but once gender is ascribed, the social order constructs and holds individuals to
strongly gendered norms and expectations (26). Lorber is stating that before gender was socially
constructed, there was no such thing as masculinity or femininity. They were created along with
Throughout the week, I recorded my behavior by taking notes around different gender
spaces and I noticed quite a few things about my masculine side. Whenever I was in a room with
just males, I tend to be overly aggressive and loud than in other situations. I lift my chin a little
higher and puff out my chest to signify my dominance over the others. In Aaron Devors
Becoming Members of Society, he proposes that ... such an alternative conception of gender
roles captures the hierarchical and competitive masculine thirst for power which can, but need
not, lead to aggression This quote is saying that masculine figures who thirst for power
compete for that power through dominance and aggression. My body language tends to be much
more physical in spaces that are dominated by males. On the weekend, I went to a music festival
called, Day N Night and I experienced something called a mosh pit. A mosh pit is a group of
people that clear a space in an area, just so they can run and jump through colliding and pushing
into other people. This space demonstrates the essence of masculinity because it is filled with
boiling rage and aggressive physical behavior for no just reason. When I am around females,
most of the time I try displaying my dominance over others and demonstrating my strengths
while masquerading my weaknesses. I behave in this fashion so males and females will not
Although I am primarily masculine, I still feel and have emotion. This may be looked at
as being feminine but I believe its just being Human. I have had several emotional connections
with people throughout my lifetime. I do not feel weak when I am able to connect with someone
on a deeper level. Empathizing with a person can truly open your mind up and allow you to feel
something through someone elses experience. I believe this is powerful because youre
empowering yourself and others with new perspective. Devor also goes on to say femininity as
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striving for cooperation or communion. Cooperation and communion do not inhibit weakness
but rather promote dominance and safety in numbers. Expression of emotion is important
because if you keep everything bottled inside, overtime a persons emotion will explode out in an
unhealthy way. When you express yourself in healthy ways, you feel better about yourself and
about those around you. Creating a bond with someone should not be looked at as weak, .
Intimate behavior causes a person to show their greatest weaknesses to another person and not
know what to expect. In reality, only the strong are able to reveal themselves in that way.
Back when I was a kid and all the way up to this day, my father has always encouraged
me to be masculine. Whenever I was sad, he would always tell me to man up or boys dont
cry.When I was mad, he encouraged me to channel that anger into something productive like
sports or weightlifting. My father always told me that, Good men work hard for everything that
they have and they dont complain about how hard they worked after. Over time I accepted that
this must be the way of the world. In Aaron Devors Becoming members of Society: The Social
are necessarily bound up in their need to understand the expectations of society of which they are
a part (37) Devor explains how children are taught their gender roles by society and what
Humans should be able to freely express themselves through gender without having to
suffer the repercussions of society. Men are still expected to be steel emotionless robots while
women are expected to be emotional wrecks that are incapable of taking care of themselves.
Masculine or feminine behavior does not define gender and neither does another persons
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opinion. Gender is decided solely by personal choice and nothing else. No matter how I may
talk, look or act, I know who I am and I dont have to alter myself to fit anyone elses schema.
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Works Cited
Groner, Rachel, and Judith Lorber. Night To His Day. Composing Gender: a Bedford