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18/10/2017

English III
Teacher: Consuelo Falcn Solano

Horror story

Student: Jos Israel Castellanos Rodrguez


Control number: 14B100077
Introduction

The story is not based on any real fact, the plot was created in its entirety and is not
the image of some history obtained from the internet. The purpose of it is to create
an atmosphere of mystery and terror in which the reader is involved as a protagonist,
looking like this the writing of a newspaper.
Just one night

I do not remember well the time but it seemed to me that it was past 2 o'clock in the
morning, the fire did not look good at all and I felt I should go for a little more wood
so I decided to leave my tent, go mistake I did not remember to take the cell phone
with me, I will never know what would have happened if I had not ...

For the weekend my friends and I decided that it would be an excellent idea to leave
the city and camp to the shores; Overall, on a few occasions we could take a break
from work and it also seemed like a good way out of the rut. The idea was clear but,
where would we camp? We were not very clear where to go because we had never
tried before but, speaking we agreed that it would be better to go to a small forest
that was a few kilometers away. We made a list where we put everything we thought
we could use, some would take the food, others were in charge of getting the stores
and I, well I would be the one who would put the car.

Saturday came and we started, everything seemed to go well, on the way we were
joking among ourselves about ghosts and things like that but I never took it seriously
because I was a first-class skeptic, I must say that some they did not want to talk
about the subject, lol maybe they were scared a little although they did not want to
admit it. We arrived at the site and stopped the car, after all the place looked good,
so we went down and began to distribute the work; some friends and I started to set
up the camp while others went to get some firewood. When everything was armed I
remembered that we had forgotten a couple of lamps in the trunk of the car, here
was where for the first time I felt that something was wrong, since I could see some
strange traces near where we had parked and a little, I do not know , I think it was
old cloth, I think that perhaps at first I did not perceive it due to the excitement of the
adventure. Do not mind it and go back to where the camp was, the view was
beautiful, beautiful lush pines with sunlight streaming through its branches.

We set up what was needed and lit a small fire in the center to light up during the
night, once we managed to turn it on after some failed attempts, we prepared to
prepare something to eat, we cooked some hotdogs improvised because we thought
it would be easy, later of this we spent time chatting and enjoying the moment.
Everything was great fun since nothing could go wrong, after all it would only be for
one night.

It was a long time before we realized that it was already very late, well maybe not,
but because of the darkness of the forest it seemed that we were in the middle of
nowhere, so we all decided to go to sleep to return the next day to the city a bit
rested. Maybe it was around 1 or 2 hours when I suddenly woke up, I think I heard
something close to my shop, although it might just be my imagination, I said to
myself, some time passed and I could not fall asleep for more attempts I did, when
suddenly I notice that the fire is about to go out and that we do not have firewood to
put it. Everything will be fine, she would tell me trying to lie to me, but I knew that an
animal could come if the fire died out, so I decided to go get some wood since when
my friends went to get her the place was not far, alone I had to go with my lamp to
pick up a little and come back; everything seemed simple.

I left my camping tent and headed for the place where I could get some branches,
the forest turned out to be a quieter and more terrifying place than I could imagine, I
could only see a few meters from me with my flashlight and the Moonlight only
created shadows that were confused in the immensity of the night. At last I arrived
and began to pick up what I needed but suddenly I began to notice an unpleasant
smell accompanied by a very peculiar feeling and, in fact for a moment I believed
that someone was looking at me in the distance. I began to hurry and every moment
felt that the darkness began to envelop the place, I turned around and I was ready
to return to the camp when suddenly I start to hear a deep breath and strange noises
in the vicinity, I start to freak out a little plus.

Just when I thought everything would get better I realize that I'm lost, I do not
remember where I walked before because all the pines look the same, I stop to think
and I just observe a long curved figure right next to me, I can not describe it, I do not
I gave the time to see it well. I start running very frightened thinking that maybe I can
leave this with only a terrifying anecdote, but luckily this is not so, fate decides to
play a joke; it starts to rain. More scared than ever, and with my heart racing I run all
I can but suddenly I slip and drop the lamp, I do not know where I'm running I just
know I should not stop, so without wanting to keep going deeper and deeper. I realize
that something is following me but I can not distinguish anything and I will not find
out, until ... I do not see a precipice and I fall.

I'm on the ground a few meters below where I was running, I think I broke my leg
and my head hurts, I think it hit me very hard because I may be unconscious lying
here. The more I think about it, the more it may go on watching me, not that it is not,
I know it's still waiting up. I see in my pockets just to realize that I do not bring my
cell phone, I should have left it in my tent by carelessness, so I have no one to call
him, anyway I think no one will notice ...
Introduccin

La historia no se encuentra basada en ningn hecho real, la trama fue creada en su


totalidad y no es la imagen de alguna historia obtenida de internet. El propsito de
la misma es crear un ambiente de misterio y terror en la que se involucre al lector
como protagonista, pareciendo de esta forma la escritura de un diario.
Solo una noche

No recuerdo bien la hora pero a m me pareca que eran pasadas de las 2 de la


maana, el fuego no luca para nada bien y sent que deba ir por un poco ms de
madera por lo que decid abandonar mi tienda de campaa, vaya error de novato
no record llevar el mvil conmigo, jams sabr lo que hubiera ocurrido de no ser
as

Para el fin de semana mis amigos y yo decidimos que sera una excelente idea salir
de la ciudad y acampar a las orillas; total en pocas ocasiones podamos tomar un
descanso del trabajo y adems pareca una buena manera para salir de la rutina.
Listo la idea era clara pero Dnde acamparamos?, no tenamos muy claro a donde
ir porque nunca antes lo habamos intentado pero, hablando coincidimos que lo
mejor sera dirigirnos hacia un pequeo bosque que quedaba a unos cuantos
kilmetros de distancia. Hicimos una lista donde pusimos todo lo que cremos que
podramos utilizar, algunos llevaran la comida, otros estaban encargados de
conseguir las tiendas y yo, bueno yo sera quien pondra el auto.

Se lleg el sbado y nos pusimos en marcha, todo pareca ir bien, en el camino


bamos bromeando entre nosotros acerca de fantasmas y cosas por el estilo pero
yo nunca me lo tomaba en serio porque era un escptico de primera, debo decir que
algunos ya no queran hablar del tema, jajaja tal vez si se asustaron un poco aunque
no quisieran admitirlo. Llegamos al sitio y detuve el auto, despus de todo el lugar
se vea bien, as que bajamos y comenzamos a repartir el trabajo; algunos amigos
y yo nos pusimos a montar el campamento mientras que otros fueron a buscar un
poco de lea. Cuando todo qued armado record que habamos olvidado un par
lmparas en la cajuela del auto, aqu fue donde por primera vez sent que algo
andaba mal, ya que pude ver unas huellas medio extraas cerca de donde
habamos aparcado y un poco de, no lo s, creo que era tela vieja, pienso que quizs
de primeras no lo percib debido a la emocin de la aventura. No le tome importancia
y regrese a donde estaba el campamento, la vista resultaba hermosa, unos bellos
pinos frondosos con la luz del sol entrando a travs de sus ramas.
Montamos lo que haca falta y prendimos una pequea fogata al centro para
alumbrarnos durante la noche, una vez que logramos encenderla despus de
algunos intentos fallidos, nos dispusimos a preparar algo para comer, cocinamos
unos hotdogs de manera improvisada porque pensamos que sera fcil, despus de
esto nos pasamos el tiempo charlando y disfrutando del momento. Todo fue muy
divertido ya que nada poda ir mal, al fin de cuentas solo sera por una noche.

Pas un largo tiempo antes de que nos diramos cuenta de que era ya muy tarde,
bueno quizs no, pero por la oscuridad del bosque pareca que estbamos en medio
de la nada, as que todos decidimos ir a dormir para regresar al da siguiente a la
ciudad un poco descansados. Tal vez pasaron alrededor de 1 o 2 horas cuando de
pronto despert, creo que escuche algo cerca de mi tienda, aunque puede que solo
fuera mi imaginacin me dije a mi mismo, transcurri algo de tiempo y no poda
conciliar el sueo por ms intentos que haca, cuando de pronto not que el fuego
esta por apagarse y que no tenemos lea para ponerle. Todo estar bien, me deca
tratando de mentirme, pero yo saba que podra acercase algn animal si el fuego
se extingua, as que decid ir a buscar un poco de madera ya que cuando mis
amigos fueron a por ella el lugar no quedaba lejos, solo tena que ir con mi lmpara
recoger un poco y volver; todo pareca sencillo.

Sal de mi tienda de acampar y me dirig hacia el lugar donde podra conseguir


algunas ramas, el bosque resultaba ser un lugar ms silencioso y aterrador de lo
que me llegue a imaginar, solo poda ver a unos cuantos metros de m con ayuda
de la linterna y la luz de la luna solo creaba unas sombras que se confundan en la
inmensidad de la noche. Al fin llegu y comenc a recoger lo que necesitaba pero,
de pronto comenc a notar un olor desagradable acompaado de una sensacin
muy peculiar y, de hecho por un momento cre que alguien me estaba viendo a lo
lejos. Comenc a apresurarme y a cada momento senta que la oscuridad
comenzaba a envolver el lugar, me di la vuelta y me dispona a regresar hacia el
campamento cuando de repente comenc a escuchar una respiracin profunda y
unos ruidos extraos en la cercana, empiezo a asustarme un poco ms.
Justo cuando pens que todo se arreglara me doy cuenta de que estoy perdido, no
recuerdo por donde camin antes porque todos los pinos lucen iguales, me detengo
a pensar y justo observo una larga figura encorvada justo al lado mo, no puedo
describirlo, no me di el tiempo para verlo bien. Comienzo a correr muy asustado
pensando que tal vez pueda salir de esta con solo una aterradora ancdota, pero
para mi suerte esto no es as, el destino decide jugarme una broma; comienza a
llover. Ms asustado que nunca, y con el corazn acelerado corro todo lo que puedo
pero de pronto resbalo y dejo caer la lmpara, no se hacia dnde estoy corriendo
solo s que no debo detenerme, as que sin querer me sigo adentrando ms y ms.
Me doy cuenta de que algo me persigue pero no logro distinguir nada y no pienso
averiguarlo, hasta que no veo un precipicio y caigo.

Estoy en el suelo a algunos metros por debajo de donde corra, creo que me romp
una pierna y me duele mucho la cabeza, creo que me golpee muy fuerte porque
puede que quede inconsciente aqu tirado. Mientras ms lo pienso puede que
aquello siga arriba observndome, no no es eso, yo s que sigue arriba esperando.
Veo en mis bolsillos solo para darme cuenta que no traigo mi celular, deb haberlo
dejado en mi tienda de acampar por descuido, as que no tengo a quien llamarle, en
fin creo que nadie se dar cuenta

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