CORPORACION UNIVERSITARIA DEL CARIBE CECAR HUMANITIES AND EDUCATION FACULTY, ENGLISH PRACTICUM @\cECAR \O PROFESIONAL PRACTICUM PI FIRST VERSION OF YOUR DIGITAL PORFOLIO FEEDBACK Sincelejo, November 1st 2017 Dear student Julian Patifio Here you will have your feedback about the first version of the portfolio you have presented in the first unit of your Professional Directed Practicum or Pl, please take into account in a carefully way this feedback in order to improve the final version of your work. Thanks for your effort and keep going on your work improvement, my best. Well done: Ok well done 20 points below described ‘Cover page is not under APA format, please correct it. No table of contents, abstract and other important. parts, deserved in an APA paper, please double check them. of de (grammer, spelling and not correct term.) (I guess this is not the term lease correct it) (This is not the term, look fora better academic one)CORPORACION UNIVERSITARIA DEL CARIBE CECAR HUMANITIES AND EDUCATION FACULTY ENGLISH TEACHING B.A PROGRAM ENOLLeH TEACHING Q CECAR Tn the vision you have te correct the paragraph and vision in 20, 10, 5 years etc. is like a goal proyected ina future tense. Good andrelevant information provided. The teacher is a Girl and in the diagram you always say his and him. When you are talking about discipiine is about her. language level, please use CEF terms in order to conectit. Whose age (grammar) At your age (grammar) Interested for (grammer) Well bred (this is not the correct term for humans, please correct the term) For that reason pay (subject verb agreement) 5 points with the aspects below The presentation letter was not submitted or alink to check provided. Well done CV.CORPORACION UNIVERSITARIA DEL CARIBE CECAR HUMANITIES AND EDUCATION FACULTY ENGLISH TEAC! IG B.A PROGRAM ENoL aH TEACHING # a CECAR Caran Unies c Ce as “Any Content submitted or a link provided. Not presented or submitted, any web page or blog link was presented. ‘Any Content submitted or a link provided. The work is not valid, until you will presented the attendance sheet signed with your ten observation hours, keep this evaluation to send it back to your attendance sheet signed with ten hours of observation. Thave read lot of misspelling and grammar mistakes, please proofread before submitting. Please check APA rules and take them into account for the next papers. 2 Some references in the lesson plan. 41.3. The grade is not going to be valid and even updated in the system until the attendance sheet, with 10 hours of observation will be submitted in the, same space provided in MOODLE. This is not going to change your grade, grades improvement are, going to be visible in next units work. CORPORACION UNIVERSITARIA DEL CARIBE CECAR HUMANITIES AND EDUCATION FACULTY ENGLISH TEACHING B.A PROGRAM. ENGLISH PRACTICUM Q CECAR bere omlcnatriti00 POR > Martha Johanna Moreno LY ey English and Practicum I and Practicum II Professor oT L av poset English Teaching B.A Program (Virtual) Tel.: 3017671231, E-mal: matthamorenoicesaredu.co Carretera Troncal de Ocaizente vie Coroz Sincelejo (Sucre) Sincelej,