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Composition 2

I was born in Tucano, a small city in Bahia. My childhood was nice, as I lived in the country side.
I had freedom to go where I Wanted. Think in future was a thing that never came in my mind Commented [H1]: X
in those days, I was just living my life with the happiness that never last after few years and the Commented [H2]: T
“feeling that I could last forever, outlast the sea, the earth, and all men. the deceitful feeling Commented [H3]: WW
that lures us on to joys, to perils, to love, to vain effort, to death. The triumphant conviction of
strength, the heat of life in the handful of dust, the glow in the heart that with every year
grows dim, grows cold, grows small, and expires , and expires, too soon, too soon...before life
itself”. Commented [H4]: :O

When I was a teenager I was seeing my future like the past of my parents, graduate at the Commented [H5]: WW
school and work in a farm or something like this. I never thought that one day I could study in a Commented [H6]: WW
University or study English, or be something more. When I was fourteen, my faith was clearly Commented [H7]: WW
the hoe.
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My time at public school was a big joke, my teachers didn’t care about the students and the Commented [H9]: \
students didn´t care about nothing, and seems that everybody knew their own stupid future Commented [H10]: X
with an early paternity or an early death, sometimes both. My mother tried to took me to a Commented [H11]: T
diferent way, but it’s hard to control a stupid teenager, and when you see nothing after school,
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no purpose of study, is easy to give up, no one seems understand at those time that the only
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way to get out of hell is studying. But study has his own hell itself. I am trying to decide the
worse. Commented [H14]: X
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My early and problematic life has changed a lot since my aunt invited me to live with her in Commented [H16]: WW
Aracaju. I spent one year with her before she kick me out. After this another aunt invited me to Commented [H17]: \
live with her, and I am still living in her house.
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If you ask what I see in the future I will probably tell that I see a unknown and hard future, and
this make me think about what I gained leaving my stupid life in Bahia to become a stupid fool Commented [H20]: WW

in Sergipe. The problably answer is some ills and a knowledge of my inability. Commented [H21]: WW
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“So Let the months and years come, they can take nothing from me, they can take
nothing more. I am so alone, and so without hope that I can confront them without fear. The
life that has borne me through these years is still in my hands and my eyes. Whether I have
subdued it, I know not. But so long as it is there it will seek its own way out, heedless of the
will that is within me.” Commented [H23]: Why so pessimist?