Artifact #2

In this essay I first stated my thesis clearly so the reader knows what I’m talking about. I
then gathered evidence and evaluated it and used it to strengthen my thesis. Then I got a
counter argument and explained why it is wrong. It took me four hours but I finished with a 4
page essay. I explained every argument in detail. It was about violence in our country. I argued
that the cause of violence in the United States was mainly caused by society. I am proud because
I received the highest grade in the class. I gave detail and thoroughly analyzed my evidence to
strongly support my thesis. I also strongly disproved the counter argument a went into detail on
why it was wrong. It was a good essay.