Liam Tedde LO5 Feedback.

10/2/17

Current Grade for LO5: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

You have produced an excellent piece here. The advert is well shot and edited together. With your
final edit it is evident that you have managed your time effectively to create an advertisement that is
of a high technical standard and clearly conveys the campaign message that you intended and it
applies the industry conventions appropriate to the piece. The advert is a distinction grade,
however, it cannot currently achieve above a merit due to missing work from your blog. Please add
this and the grade will increase

The resubmission deadline is: 23rd February