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Kyle Birch LO3 Feedback. 3/1/2018

Current Grade for LO3: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

There are elements of a Merit grade in your pre production, what you do have, overall is
some excellent work. However, there are a few minor additions and some work that hasn’t
been added. You have developed appropriate ideas for the advertisement campaign and
then developed proficient pre production material.

You need to add an editor rate (from Bectu) on the budget and then add a total. The recce
seems incomplete also, add text for the rest of the images to contextualise them. The risk
assessment requires more detail, as it is in bullet point form, please write in short
paragraphs. The contingency plan also needs more detail. Finally - ensure that you add a
key to all of the work so it is easily identifiable to myself and the examiner who has
contributed to the work.

Finally, you have the following work missing: shooting script, as a result - until this has been
added - the learning outcome cannot pass.

The final deadline is: 19th January 2018