Ms. Nicoll History 2017 
 
 
Name: Gabriel Berger Date: 10/23/17

Essay Prep Work for ​7th Grade 

Part 4: First Body Paragraph 
 
Directions: Write a near "perfect" paragraph 1. Use sources. Include one quote. 
Main
Confucianism changed throughout the Sung and Mongol dynasties. 
Statement 
Make sure to  According to Columbia University, “Confucianism had naturally
mention: 
  changed over the centuries since the time of Confucius (ca. 500 BCE).”
● One Quote  To compete with Buddhism, the leaders of Confucianism incorporated
● Point 1: 
● Point 2:  Buddhist principles into their own religion. Along with this,
● Point 3:  Confucianism blended with Taoism/Daoism and it was also called
● Transition 
  Neo-Confucianism. These changes impacted the Sung dynasty.
Source Link​-Columbia U
Links: Link​-Study
 
Please write a ​full​ paragraph in the pink space (do NOT write individual statements).  
Put the statements together and make it flow as one paragraph. 

P. 1