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Introduction Did you know that Debs (animat's name) Slee UN site’ down (Write an interesting fact about your animal here) You might also be surprised to lear that Bots (animal's name} M her bas carry beic Hobbies When Soe gil Sod sasre\ mes (Write another interesting fact about your animal here) This animal report is about_Aa\s, , their habitat, what they eat, and how (animal's name} care for their young. UVE (paragraph 2) Write 3-4 sentences about where bats live. ol EAT (paragraph 3) Write 3-4 sentences about what bats eat. Don't forget to Indent! Mall Yeats . Vill. Bol eok Cruijs OWnevgh) They dem Wood Care for their young (paragraph 4) Write 3- 4 sentences describe how bats care for their young. Don't forget to indent!!! Whey Coors Shor Waly Wh Yeh Mew food « Hoth tonite! 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