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Professor Campbells Peer Review of My Extended Inquiry Project
Professor Campbells Peer Review of My Extended Inquiry Project
David Ramsey
Malcolm Campbell
English 1104-004
April 4, 2018
winter’s evening in 1892 when he proclaimed the re-establishment of the Olympic Games
(“PyeongChang 2018”). Since then, there have been twenty-eight Summer Olympic Games in
twenty-three cities and twenty-three Winter Olympic Games in twenty cities with the movement
continuing still today (“List of Olympic Games host cities”; “PyeongChang 2018”). According
to the Olympic Organization from their website article “Pyeongchang,” the International
Olympic Committee came into existence on June 23, 1894. The first Olympics took place in
Athens, Greece on April 26, 1896. In 1924 in Chamonix, France, the first winter Olympic sport
began: ice hockey. Overtime, more than fifty-nine events have been added (Cooney; “The
Olympic Games”).
Recently, the 2018 Winter Games in Pyeongchang County, South Korea regarding ice
hockey, birth witness to two sisters playing ice hockey while representing two different countries
(Jacobson). This wonderful story is just one of the many stories that developed at the 2018
Winter Games, but this was the story in which captured my attention the greatest. Hannah, for
Team USA, and older sister, Marissa, for the unified Korean team, are the daughters of an
American couple, Greg and Robin Brandt (Jacobson). Marissa from South Korea was adopted by
the Brandt family when she was just four months old (Jacobson). She has always played the
sport of ice hockey and so has her sister (Jacobson). However, Marissa did wear a jersey that has
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her Korean name, Yoonjung, and hopes that it will trigger her birth mother to come forward
(Jacobson). When asked what she would say to her birth mother, she expressed that she would
just want to thank her for putting her up for adoption (Jacobson). In addition, she is thankful for
the parents she does have (Jacobson). What intrigued me the most about this compelling story
was the fact that Hannah made the comment that her and her sister have been playing on the
same team pretty much every year growing up together as well as Marissa’s comments on what
she would want to say to her birth mother touched me deeply (Jacobson). This heartwarming
story obviously began to make me reflect on my own sibling bonds that I have with my two
sisters, Suzanna and Samantha. With the aid of this story and my own reflections, the simple
question of why siblings are similar or not was conceived. But more importantly to me, was why
are me and my sisters the same in some areas and completely different in other areas. For
Oh Suzanna!
On an early, and I do mean early, morning of the sixth, in the hot month of July, in the
year of 1984, I was introduced not only to my mother and father but to the world, it’s a boy.
Conveniently, I was the first addition, that was until 1985, in the month of September, on the
fifteenth day, when I was introduced to my baby sister, Suzanna. Even though I was only a one
year old at that point and definitely did not know the true ramifications of that meeting, I am sure
I understood or soon would have, that the game had changed in the Ramsey household. Growing
up in the Ramsey household was short lived to say the least. My loving parents sadly divorced
when I was four and my sister was three so most of my memories that I have from my younger
years are of having parents living in two different homes. However, my mother remarried a
couple of years later to my stepfather who has to this day, been a father to my sister and I.
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Unfortunately for my father, it would be awhile before he tied the knot again which did not occur
until I was twenty-one. The marriage would unite my sister and I, who were much older, with a
step brother and step sister as well as a half-sister named Samantha. The marriage did not last
though, so I will only be evaluating the sibling bond that exist between Samantha, Suzanna, and
myself. Given the ages of myself and Suzanna, we did not live in a family setting with our step
brother and step sister, thus I would have not established a quantified experience level with them
to develop a true sibling bond to evaluate. From the up and down, good and egregious, calm and
tumultuous, roller-coaster ride we call sibling bonds, I know and still know, that my sisters, just
as I will, will always have each other’s back. Throughout this exploratory essay, I will utilize the
knowledge that I learned to examine my own sibling bonds to determine why siblings are similar
or not.
The Landscape
Unfortunately, sibling bonds have not adequately been researched due to the wide
accepted point of view from early scientists that siblings are fungible meaning a genetic
commodity (“Science Looks At The Sibling Effect”). In simpler words, everyone has one mother
and one father but can have more than one sibling suggesting that the parent to child bond is
more important to the development of a child than the applicability of their sibling bond (Kluger
7). Because of the neglected area of sibling bonds, it was not taken serious by scientists until
approximately fifteen years ago (“The sibling bond”). Naturally, psychologists, sociologists,
anthropologists, biologists, and even zoologists began to study the dynamic bond between
siblings from a genetic, sociological, and psychological point of views (Kluger 12). For example,
after a sand tiger shark mates, a mother shark will release the fertilized eggs into her womb
where they will hatch (Kluger 17). Once the babies have teeth, the strongest baby will feed on
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the others until there is only one baby remaining in the womb which the mother will continue to
release eggs to feed that one baby until the baby is born (Kluger 18). Lucky for us, humans are
different in that aspect because we as babies come into this world very helpless and open for
attack. If our mothers and fathers acted like that of the animal kingdom, the humankind may very
According to Jeffrey Kluger, there are a myriad of environmental factors that complicate
researching the dynamic sibling bonds such as age differences, geography, culture, birth order,
education and a plethora of more (Kluger 8). To efficiently evaluate my own sibling bonds, I will
be utilizing only four environmental factors which are age difference, gender difference, income,
and birth order. These four environmental factors I have chosen represents the greatest
differences in how my sisters and I were raised. In addition, I will be utilizing four theoretical
psychologically oriented perspectives as lenses in which to view the environmental factors that
Environmental Factors
To begin my tedious, yet exciting journey, I first had to establish exactly what the sibling
bond is, which turns out is a sibling dyad constellation (Whiteman et al. 132). A dyad simply
defines a relationship between two people such as a brother and sister (Whiteman et al. 132). To
get an idea of just how many dyads can exist within a family, let’s look at the famous Kennedy
family who had nine children which resulted in fifty-five different dyads (“The sibling bond”).
Since I understood what my sibling bond could be defined as, I started investigating
environmental factors which are those factors from your surroundings such as a sibling or where
you live that effects an individual in any way (Whiteman et al. 135). Given the complexity and
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the almost unsurmountable number of factors that contribute to a child as they navigate through
this world, it is understandable that I chose only four. Most of these environmental factors are
self-explanatory, such as age and gender difference, however, I will define birth order which
means the order in which you were born in relation to your siblings. Birth order is so profound
that twenty-one of the first twenty-three astronauts were either firstborns or only children
(“Science Looks At The Sibling Effect”). Typically, firstborns display the characteristic traits of
being reliable, conscientious, structured, cautious, controlling, and achievers (Voo). A middle
child is prone to have the characteristic traits of being people-pleasers, somewhat rebellious,
thrives on friendships, has a large social circle, and peacemaker (Voo). The last born will usually
seeker, and self-centered (Voo). Finally, an only child will encompass the characteristic traits of
being mature for their age, perfectionists, conscientious, diligent, and leaders (Voo). There is an
exception to these rules which is in the case of twins due to them operating as a family within a
family and are often perceived as a single unit (Voo). After reviewing these characteristics, I can
see that I, as being the firstborn, do posses a lot of those firstborn traits as well as my sisters
displaying the characteristic traits for their perspective birth order. For me, my baby sister,
Samantha, fits almost perfectly with the last-born characteristics, however, Suzanna does not fit
into the mold of the middle child but acts more like a firstborn.
That curiosity as to why Suzanna did not lead me to my next environmental factor which
is gender differences. Gender difference plays an important role to sibling bonds as well and
breaks into mixed gender dyads or same gender dyads (Whiteman et al. 127). I share a mixed
dyad with my sisters which explains why Suzanna did not have all those characteristic traits from
the middle or last born because she is the first girl born in our family. For example, if my sister
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would have been another boy than that potential infinitesimal difference would have changed
how we interacted because she would have exhibited the characteristic traits of the middle born
or last born. In general boys tend to be more pugilistic than girls (“Science Looks At The Sibling
Effect”).
Next, I wanted to know how the age difference affected my sibling bonds due to Suzanna
and I only being a little over a year a part and Samantha and I having a more significant age
difference of twenty-one years. Age difference dictates that the less amount of a gap results in
more of a rivalry between siblings and if there is a large amount of a gap the older sibling will
take on the role of an aunt or uncle (Voo; Kluger). According to Kluger, studies have found that
over ninety percent of small children fight over somebody touching, playing with, and looking at
the other person’s stuff (“The sibling bond”). In my case, that explains why growing up with
Suzanna, we always fought over who was the best at whatever the task was and why I act more
The next environmental factor that I will discuss is income, more importantly, the income
of a two-parent family and a single parent home and the effects it has on the children. According
to Berlin, about a third of all children born in the United States each year are born out of wedlock
and about half of all first marriages end in divorce (2). Those staggering numbers leave a
multitude of children living in a single-parent household which tends to be poor (Berlin 2). Not
to say that a child will necessarily be better off living in a two-parent household but on average
they will be better on a wide range of social indicators (Berlin 2). The reason I chose income as
an environmental factor is due to my parents divorcing when my sister and I were very young.
On a couple of occasions, I prompted to live with my father and from those experiences I can
truly say I understand the struggle of a single-parent. Additionally, low-income families such as
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a single-parent family has less resources to deal with life’s challenge (Berlin 6). I saw the
difference in how I lived versus how my sister lived. Suzanna did not have to worry about
clothing, food, and responsibilities as much as I did. For example, I made sure I was up in the
morning to catch the bus as well as make myself some food when I got home but I would not
change anything about the way I grew up. Those circumstances created the man that I see
Before moving onto the four theoretical psychologically oriented perspectives that I will
be utilizing to solve the rest of the mystery that is my sibling bonds, I want to address why the
deidentification process and favoritism was not mentioned. The deidentification process is the
process in which siblings develop different qualities and select different niches as a way of
maximizing resources from parents thus, reducing the level of competition (McHale et al. 915).
Favoritism needs not to be define, we all know it well. However, Kluger cites a study that found
seventy percent of fathers and sixty-five percent of mothers exhibit a preference for at least one
child (“The sibling bond”). The reason for their exclusion was due to the overlapping area
between a sibling dyad constellation and the dyadic relationship with a parent. Additionally, it
will insure that my message is received as to what my purpose was which is to find the answer to
Theoretical Perspectives
Upon learning the wide array of environmental factors, my question became how these
factors operate, coexist, and how may I implement the concepts into my world. The four
evolutionary, social psychological, social learning, and family-ecological systems. I will utilize
the theoretical perspectives as a lens to examine the environmental factors discussed earlier.
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attachment and the survival function of social behavior (Whiteman et al. 125). Under this
perspective there will be two theories that I will discuss which are the attachment theory and
Adler’s theory. Attachment theory which is rooted in the writings of John Bowlby attempts to
et al. 125). Over the period of an infants first year, an attachment relationship forms with a
caregiver (Whiteman et al. 125). Then in the second year uses that caregiver and other members
such as a sibling, as a secure base to return to in their time of need (Whiteman et al. 125). Due to
the fragile condition a dyad is, children’s relationships good or egregious with the caregiver sets
the stage for the qualities of their sibling relationships (Whiteman et al. 125). Adler’s theory
(Whiteman et al. 128). One of the key concepts in Adler’s theory was the inferiority complex
which put social comparisons and power dynamics in families at the central of defining one’s
self (Whiteman et al. 128). Social psychological perspective looks at how others influence one
another and their motives (Whiteman et al. 130). Of special interest in this perspective, is the
social comparison theory which was proposed by Leon Festinger in the 1950s (Whiteman et al.
130). The social comparison theory stats that individuals are motivated to evaluate themselves
based on how they measure up against others, especially with those that are viewed as like
themselves (Whiteman et al. 130). Social learning theories suggest a gained behavior through
observing others (Whitman et al. 130). The principles of observational learning propose that
family members are important models for social learning if they are warm and nurturing
(Whiteman et al. 132). Through the act of observing the interactional styles of other family
members a child learns social concepts (Whiteman et al. 132). Finally, family-ecological systems
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view families as independent elements that are always in flux with each other, extended families,
and their surroundings (Whiteman et al. 134). The principles of family system theory hold that
families must be studied as complete systems (Whiteman et al. 134). Within this theory, families
are separated into a hierarchy, then separated into different dyads, and then viewed as
After gathering the information about the theoretical perspectives, a vivid picture began
to materialize and with that picture came a level of understanding. The environmental factors are
heavily embedded into the theoretical perspectives as much as the theoretical perspectives give
almost a value to the environmental factors. The two elements dancing in a circle in constant
motion as they overlap and flux upon each other. By utilizing the environmental factors and
theoretical perspectives that I have discussed, it becomes clear why the two-aforementioned
sisters that played ice hockey in the 2018 Winter Olympics have the sibling dyad constellation
that they do as well as my own. However, I would like to add some points of my own to the
conversation such as there should be greater attention and research dedicated towards the sibling
dyad constellation. In addition, that research should represent a greater representation of ethnic
groups in their studies. According to McHale et al., much less is known about the ways siblings
contribute to each other in a positive development in ethnic minority families (919). Moreover,
there needs to be a logical and ethical approach to get solid data on the full spectrum of sibling
bonds.
Reflection
Reflecting upon the ponderous quantity of information that I was able to find on the
sibling dyad constellation I can efficiently answer the question why my sisters and I have the
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bond that we have. For example, due to the small age difference between Suzanna and myself,
lead to a sibling rivalry which displays the key concept of the Adler’s theory which is inferiority
complex. Another example, is one that involves the overlapping areas of two environmental
factors which are gender difference and birth order regarding myself and Suzanna. Birth order
would suggest that I have certain characteristic traits as the firstborn, but she has some of those
same traits, but gender difference explains why we share some of those same traits. If the gender
of my sister was different than my childhood would have been extremely different. Who would
have thought that something so small as gender would have had a ripple effect that would have
not only changed our lives but also changed the countless lives that make up our world. For
example, our younger sister, mother, father, stepfather, aunts, uncles, cousins, and the people of
the world that we have directly or indirectly met. From this research I have gained a much deeper
understanding and a greater appreciation for the siblings that I have and would not change them
in any way. In addition, through this analyzing process I will be able to repair any bumps that
may arise in the future and in the further future, my own children. To conclude in the words of
Jeffrey Kluger, “There may be no relationship that effects us more profoundly, that’s closer,
finer, harder, sweeter, happier, sadder, more filled with joy or fraught with woe than the
relationship we have with our brothers and sisters” (“The sibling bond”).
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