Green Eye Zaluski

With a focused look, senior Hannah Zaluski participates in the April photo walk on a warm day.
Zaluski took spring photos and practiced selective focus by taking pictures of her fellow
students. Zaluski said, “ I’m really happy the weather was finally nice to go outside.”
Rubric rating submitted on: 4/23/2018, 9:55:21 AM by ken.kasee@chagrinschools.org
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Composition missing or a isolated strengths and the strengths shows

(faces visable bare moments hint need for outweigh the thorough
and strong beginning; at what the revision are weaknesses; a control and
center of writer not yet writer has in about equal; small amount skills in this
interest. showing any mind about half-way of revision is trait; many
Backs, control home needed strengths
lowered present
heads, and
dark shadows
avoided. photo
comp element
employed)
Your score: 5
Technical missing or a isolated strengths and the strengths shows
Quality & bare moments hint need for outweigh the thorough
Crops (sharp beginning; at what the revision are weaknesses; a control and
photos, writer not yet writer has in about equal; small amount skills in this
cropped to showing any mind about half-way of revision is trait; many
remove control home needed strengths
extraneous present
space, avoid
cropping body
parts, edited
for red eye)
Your score: 5

Title of Photo missing or a isolated strengths and the strengths shows

(Brief, but bare moments hint need for outweigh the thorough
strong beginning; at what the revision are weaknesses; a control and
story-telling writer not yet writer has in about equal; small amount skills in this
photo to showing any mind about half-way of revision is trait; many
enhance control home needed strengths
viewing present
experience)
Your score: 5

Caption (ABC missing or a isolated strengths and the strengths shows

Caption tells bare moments hint need for outweigh the thorough
the story beginning; at what the revision are weaknesses; a control and
beyond the writer not yet writer has in about equal; small amount skills in this
photo) showing any mind about half-way of revision is trait; many
Your score: 5 control home needed strengths
present

Control of missing or a isolated strengths and the strengths shows

Syntax, bare moments hint need for outweigh the thorough
Grammar, beginning; at what the revision are weaknesses; a control and
Punctuation, writer not yet writer has in about equal; small amount skills in this
Spelling and showing any mind about half-way of revision is trait; many
Conventions control home needed strengths
for Structure, present
Paragraphing,
Mechanics,
and Format in
Caption
Your score: 5

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