Ruiming- You are getting there! I think you need to be more specific with your common theme. What are the different views that these two articles discuss? Who has different views? What gender are you discussing? If you stay specific from the beginning it will be easier for the reader to follow the rest of your essay. Also, remember to have this common idea reflected throughout your paper and how it relates to you. In other words, answer the prompt to its fullest extent. How does this idea apply to your own life? Discuss your gender experience. Then, use the articles as evidence for your gender experience, Please see me if you need more help. Grade: 70%